ima make this real now this hit is gonna be personal

im not gonna go till i see wat i wanna see understand my paine easy go easy see let me spit this cheeze im not the type for catz to disprespect me no more free styles no naming names i done changed this shit u say im gay but u should check ur mouth how u come off this topic understand this homie we was koo but this is far as u go i was there for u now u diss me u outta line its all eyes on me this aint about race i dont come off like so get this straight cuz im stronger than u i'll kill u with a feathered pillow cuz my words are torture they burn like flames its how i live and its kadaffi mutha fucka i'll see u in hell, u bust caps while i bust raps squize ur last lines cuz ima bust this nine show u how to shine wen i come off this chair was hit by my own kind but i stood bak up and im back at it again u too candy fight ima rap this beef up real tite so welcome to my topic make yah self at home cuz this is as hot as it gets ima mc killa too hot for thrilla u aint a real killa how can u shoot wen u cant see ur target?thas wat i thought u too blind u aint shit to me ur new fish on the street u shrivle up in my heat im aztec god they shed blood for me the same way u will wen i shoot my words this aint about me or ur money u can be richer than me but u gonna need ur money cuz all i see is pussy in a rag u wear ur sanfrancisco city hat where the home of the gays are, where i come we dont take shit take up any body on ur roster who can fuck me u bobbin head mutha fucka i hustle till the sun come down u better run wen u hear my name aint u heard my porpose is gun down names and u on my list so ball up ur fist this is the last round and and ima bust my last round u too small to hop box with god so drop this beef cuz im done the bell has rung now i really see the bitch behind the twinkle in ur eye hahah

-kadaffi

yo yo dis mutha fucca is a no-show, check the last forum he is a ho-yo/i think u been smokin 2 many trees if u honestly think u can beat me/see me roll 2 ur crib cuz u kno i kno where u live, and remember when u fucked dat pig whats her name.. oh yea jaianne, damn homie dats shit hardly even makes u a man/ remember when u called me a pizza face and that i was a discrace well now look who's puttin u in ur place/dogg i'll give u advice, start workin on ur skills and stop poppin the pills/i admit, it was funny when i saw dat fat muthafucca smash u through a wall right in the middle of the hall I bet u really wanted 2 bawl like a fat bitch who ran outta potato chips/and look at ur last rap, shit sounded like crap cuz u kno an azn can't go rat-a-tat-tat like da brat/u get upset when slapped by hermaphadites and girls with crooked teeth and u wanted 2 fight me in da streetz? i even remember how u always think ur bad and when u told me u got socked by ur dad, shit dat is sad but i dont care how can i feel for sum muthafucca wit no hair and got head from a bear/so I’ll finish u off on dis line im sorry I gotta kill ur ass 4 tryin

oh yea and I aint even got dat damn hat no more as soon as I knew dat shit it was gone cuz I hate gays like u bitch-cashflow

we r homies but had 2 get dis shit off our chest

I had way to much trouble reading your verse kadaffi, work on ya structure.
I saw some o.k. punches in ya's lil cashflow. good job.

No hate.Props to both.

Vote on my battle w/ De Niro

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36306

both raps were tyte but cashflow had i think better punches


vote= lil cashflow

Wash-ed the fuck out...

You guys make it painful to read verses. Have you looked at other people's drops? Break this into bars.

You ^guys^ think this was all right?
Cashflow took it because he had much better structure, and made some... punches. It's corny shit, but it was more than just the shit-talking that Kadaffi came up with. Get off the gun play, kad, I know you love Tupac, but all eyez, aren't on you.

"and look at ur last rap, shit sounded like crap cuz u kno an azn can't go rat-a-tat-tat like da brat"
God that's wack...
Keep HipHop alive man, keep spitting that racist ish... ass clown.

Unofficial Vote = lilcashflow

sorry this is cheating but i dont like racist ppl and don’t rate this one its juts fo sho haha

i ripp holes in souls like a man possess/put 100 rounds of led in your chest/gauge your eyes from their socket and hang the nerve ends round my neck like a medal/bitch no one rates you/sinista hunts fools like you to slew/you kno battlin me is like a blunt knife...pointless coz when i click submit reply/its boom..byebye/yo this guy is nice, but fresh got ta snuff ya flame, your goin to slow so i'll rush ya game, your flow and ya gurl suck the same// dawg your cute but no more b2k, i'm the hottest shit to hit since nWa,// man i'v been sent to stop your bullshit, man even if i gave you a trigger little man would be scared ta pull it// lol little wookie, dawg replace the w with an r// anyway let me get back to ma flow// check ma rymes are similar to the dessert"they stay hot" and they got you, ma glocks is similar to ma rymes"they stay hot too"// man your wanted by your mom for "wettin the bed", i'm a convicted felon wanted in 3 states for "wettin the bed" but ma fluid was red and yours was yellow, i'm the next best poet since the man who wrote "othello"//
yo i like you kid, u got good taste, and i like ya gurl she gives good "face" , when i speak the earth rattles and shakes, and i spitt toxic flows like venomis snakes// man ya gurl loves me cause i stay huggin her thighs, and when i fucker from behind it be blowin here eyes // i'm sorry i'll take the blame young bastad,but look at it this way you enjoyed the fame while it lasted.----- understand dog we all did some shit but why u gotta say all this shit that aint tru? So if u gotta put it dat way then i gotta put it dat way who was there for u wen some nigga liked ur bitch? remeber wen u said u hated the azn dude cuz he was talk to ur bitch and now u trying to scheme by saying hes koo? Wat the fuck is wit dat?and for gods sake yah mom fucked a paralyzed man in a wheel chair and u liked the same bitch as me and u still talk to her ass so stop being a bitch and saying she a hermaphrodite and u kno u still hurtin cuz u girl got banged by another nigga and don’t hide, u a weak nigga wen it comes to emotional shit so don’t make everything personal so rember this bitch this is rap this aint about personal shit so since u screamed all my shit out loud wat else is there to kno about me? hahah

I liked that better than your original drop! Would have gotten my vote. Seriously though! Cut your bars up. You got a little bit broken when it got personal towards the end, but... this was some of the best of the raw-newbie shit talking I've seen around there. Like it was actually enjoyable. Keep elevatin.

Shit was hard to read dawgs....Cashflow came wit harder punches...

You gotta split dat shit up...

Kadaffi dat last shit you wrote was ill...

VOTE=CASHFLOW

kadaffi only cause ya punches lacked but you gotta better style...That last shit if ya posted my vote was for you

wtf this is hard to read..

errr ill post my vote l8r when u read this shit

Pz

yeh i was a lil distracted wen i made my original drop was too focused on guns and shit cuz i was mad but my second verse i calmed a lil so i guess it came out good

good shit, why u act different when u come 2 my house and aint say shit tho u tryin 2 make shit personal it aint workin and dis aint a rap dis is a fuck u dogg u aint shit u sayin i act emotional wtf with dat its a lie cuz shit i never cried or came close all i did was laugh at yo ass 4 bein emotional u didnt see me i do admit shit tho i was mad when da azn like the girl i liked and she liked him back but fuck it i figured out dat she aint even close 2 right 4 me but unlike u like sum ugly bitch and she will never be nuttin 2 u either but u can't get it through ur head man and shit i aint mad i feel bad u cant think strait man and this is exactly like the benzino diss by eminem called the sauce u like a bitchzino and like me bein the eminem dats wha person u are

oh yea and all dat shit was prewritten he showed me dat last night so quiet actin like a bitch and take the loss dogg