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Old 04-19-03, 06:35 AM   #1
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Probably Too Complex For You

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Me, myself And I will acheive shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
two decades deep, rememberances of my entrance into this endless sentence/
my clock ticks at the pace i walk with, slowly stagnated, half sacred, lock smith/
master of my own akward processed concious/
These heathens pass me by,with their glassy eyes/
masses drafting lies with massive ties to their graphic reliance science defied I/
left divided, a hybrid eyelid blink my liveable pious tries/
with fires beside this tired wire bone skeletal expired sellable buyer of hell/
full of medical swell my heretical spell disembowellement of edible realms/
i eat my flesh and return as the same/
entity tempted and tainted by empty centuries/
painted the stench of me destroys this polluted void that entered me/
since i was loin juice..if i fill myself with thoughts/
will it reach the top, explode and speak to God/
letting go of my peace, the fraud i teach/
father me out this martyred beast i call/
me, myself and I acheiving shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
I'm still giving more, and living slow/
will time passes me by like my grasp of life drastically/
i guess it has to be mine, and yours/
skin pores leaking my sins for people ive been before....
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Old 04-19-03, 08:17 AM   #2
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Nope Not For Me..

Dope Shit Bro, I Really Got Into That..

**Reads Again**
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Old 04-19-03, 08:25 AM   #3
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thanks N...your shit is complex and i like readin complex verbals...problem is not too many kats in here do though...its all gravy though...good looking out...wahid

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Old 04-19-03, 09:06 AM   #4
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uppin
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Old 04-19-03, 09:21 AM   #5
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Whoa I Liked This Piece Alot.... I Like The Way The First Part Is Repeated Again Towards The End.... That Shit Was Ill, Seriously..... Do Ya Do Audios?!?



Keep It Up Man
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Old 04-19-03, 09:24 AM   #6
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dope!!!!whoo - complex.. Nice 2 see sum1s writing shit that means sumtin u no wat im saying - deep . great pik of words. That had me intrested ....
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Old 04-19-03, 11:26 AM   #7
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This was ILL...Realy feelin this right here...
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Old 04-19-03, 11:49 AM   #8
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thanks for the replys...and to answer your question methane yes i do audios as well...good looking out...wahid
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Old 04-19-03, 12:22 PM   #9
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Old 04-19-03, 12:47 PM   #10
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shit was ill narc,loved the ending starting htis,shit was deep as the abyss,totally my style nahmean,definite put this on a mic...nice nice nice....
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Old 04-19-03, 12:53 PM   #11
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Shukran dunny...good looking out...wahid
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Old 04-19-03, 03:08 PM   #12
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real good use of vocab man, really showed off ur skill and knowledge
one thing i gotta say is i couldnt really get into it, i understood it all none of the words were over my head or nething like that but i just wasnt feelin what u were tryin to put out,
neway it was still a good piece that showed a lot of talent
return the favor and hit up my post
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Old 04-20-03, 01:04 AM   #13
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That had less vocab than I'm used to from you.. but it was still pretty good. OoNnEe
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Old 04-20-03, 07:31 AM   #14
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good shit was a lil too complex for me, not the ryhmes the meening, goos shit 0ne


everyone puts sum weird languange for close so

hola como estas
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Old 04-20-03, 08:18 AM   #15
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thanks for the replys...that post was about greed...guess i shoulda gotten more complex lol...good looking out...wahid
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