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05-08-03, 11:31 AM | #1 | ||||||
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yo man how can i improve this itz my first rap {peace}
IP: 3E03 1C1D
ima just like a boulda i burn and kill/
i aint gona stop till u no im 4 real/ burn thow ur face like burning paper/ u no u wanna be scared i werse then vapa (vapa iz like da ardest person in ur area) u no ur feelin me but u dont sea me,beleve me,uva mc~s dont c me/ u wouid nt wanna meet me/ my secend verse it getz werse nufin getz werse then this/ but no i aint got time 4 dat i just wanna ryhme and dat/ coz i ryhme wit such words peaple call me da dicshrnary/ i murder 21 line when im playin picshernary/ so anyways watch out i couid b cumin 4 u so u betta make sure ur in a badboy crew i didnt have a lot of time plezzzzz rate me |
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05-08-03, 12:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: EE66 657E
Up your vocab and punches
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05-08-03, 12:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
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o0oo and make it longer
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05-09-03, 01:32 PM | #4 | ||||||
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more vocab well better vocab and punches
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05-09-03, 07:29 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 1A3F D10C
your flow was good
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05-10-03, 05:40 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 6E6C 3F07
for a first time woz dat good thumz up or down
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05-11-03, 01:38 PM | #7 | ||||
Yeah Keep Biting.
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first you need to change that wack ass name
then you need to learn to spell then you need waaaaay more vocab and you need wordplay... but for your first time you were ight ...i suggest you read this and try again... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44110 |
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05-11-03, 02:02 PM | #8 | ||||||
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u need to work on some more shit, alot
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05-11-03, 03:17 PM | #9 | |||||||
..:Currently Retired::..
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IP: 1EDC 2A63
Go to battling 101...and battling 102.....final answer
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