A story about a love gone wrong...Then brought back together

Evolve:
our romance was never a secret, everyone scoped & peeped it
we danced with hope to keep it, my love ropped your sweetness
my hands stroked your frame like ink to a page, it was genius
im mean this, we had something the i considered special
the moon had no room if it wasnt starring you, so celestial
but i just had to test you, couldnt leave well enough alone
till enough was enough, became too tuff to put up with your tone
voices kept calling my mind's phone, just got sick of the same old covo
got me going gozo, bonkers,crazy... what ever you want to call it
at first it didnt phaze me, it was inevitable but i tried to stall it
didnt love you at all, it.... got old & i was just frustrated
the trust faded, couldnt believe you any more... you must hate it
but thats whats up, aint it?
thats the picture, any way you paint it... the true colors
in the end we're barely just friends, we are through lovers

MeNTiLL:
You were tha one tha opened my eyes to tha world, Truly
Tha 1st 1 that made me skip tha features and look 4 inner beauty
Didn't refuse me, But accepted me 4 who I was not who I could be
Wit U everythin' was in perfect unison, Exactly how it should be
U understood me, Heard me out, Helped me thru my stress and pain
U blessed tha rain that shed from my eyes, Left me less than plain
U had nuthin' left to gain from our relationship but U remained here
Showed me tha reality in life, And helped explain pain's tears
Goin' on five years plus, U still exist in my life wit complete trust
Me and U made tha perfect couple, Together there was none that could defeat us

Evolve:
is it really said and done??.... or did we just need a break
i think that was it... because i know my feelings werent fake
they were as real as it gets, cant forget the music we would make
the time we would take & how we would concentrate together
each time we spoke felt like an eternity, it seemed to last forever
kept it clever, never ended each time on a bad note
& i saved every single letter penned that i ever wrote
every sylabol, adjective and verb had the highest worth
helped my get by this hurt & survive my life on this earth
found you 21 years after my birth, can't give up without a fight
i see you every time i look, even with eyes closed.. you are my sight
damn, your shape and lines look tight... still no need to bite
im infatuated with words.... I JUST LOVE TO WRITE

MeNTiLL:
I guess it's true when everyone told me that tides turn
Cuz our luv has burnt up in flames to tha point where my eyez burn
When I stare. Wat did I do 2 earn this? I never saw it comin'
I can see clearly that our passion need exercise, Didn't know it would start runnin'
Seems like U were gunnin', Aimin' straight 4 my heart, But U tried to play it cool
I should of known from tha start that it was a trick, But I was afraid to say it, fool
Our relationship, I tried to save it too, But I guess it juss didn't work
I wasn't even tryna lift up ya skirt, But U still say I left U hurt
Made me feel lower than dirt, But eventually U said U'd come back to help me escape tha fate
That I was given without U, I told everyone about U, Oh by tha way my luv's name was PaperMate

AIGHT!!!... felt your verse Mentill... Let See How Much This Gets Slept On.... Caus You Know IT Will!!!!!

thats some emotional shit right there. i dig it man. everyones always rappin about being hardcore and you all stuck it with some true raps. emotion is a big part of music man, and y'all brought it out here. i dig it. i'm just a newbie, but i know good when i hear it.

THanks ... Appreciated

nighty night

Evolve and Mentill a collab I've been waiting to see....

Mentill fav verse: You were tha one tha opened my eyes to tha world, Truly
Tha 1st 1 that made me skip tha features and look 4 inner beauty
Didn't refuse me, But accepted me 4 who I was not who I could be
Wit U everythin' was in perfect unison, Exactly how it should be
U understood me, Heard me out, Helped me thru my stress and pain
U blessed tha rain that shed from my eyes, Left me less than plain

Evolve fav verse: kept it clever, never ended each time on a bad note
& i saved every single letter penned that i ever wrote
every sylabol, adjective and verb had the highest worth
helped my get by this hurt & survive my life on this earth
found you 21 years after my birth, can't give up without a fight
i see you every time i look, even with eyes closed.. you are my sight

<b> I liked this piece alot

This was some emotional shit ,................... Both emcees held it down ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, came out On Fire.................Wordplay was Maddness , , content was Ill . . .. . overall u catz get a 9/10

sweet jesus tapdancing christ this was amazing. Nice twist at the end, though evolve's verse ruined the ending of Mentill's for me.
You both had dope wordplay and multis, and flow that was unmistakeable. This was a good piece because everbody writes about love in terms of humans, but your entire collab personified writing. Beautiful concept.

Evolve's best lines:
im mean this, we had something the i considered special
the moon had no room if it wasnt starring you, so celestial

thats the picture, any way you paint it... the true colors
in the end we're barely just friends, we are through lovers

found you 21 years after my birth, can't give up without a fight
i see you every time i look, even with eyes closed.. you are my sight

Mentill's best lines:
You were tha one tha opened my eyes to tha world, Truly
Tha 1st 1 that made me skip tha features and look 4 inner beauty

Seems like U were gunnin', Aimin' straight 4 my heart, But U tried to play it cool
I should of known from tha start that it was a trick, But I was afraid to say it, fool

Made me feel lower than dirt, But eventually U said U'd come back to help me escape tha fate
That I was given without U, I told everyone about U, Oh by tha way my luv's name was PaperMate

Dope work, both of you.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

ahha liked the papermate line haha...keep spittin this shit fam,this was some niceness yet again from you two...im likin both yall verses,they went well together...understatement said it all fo rme so yer...good work

Dope!

I loved the twist at the end, as everyone should know I love twists seeing as I try to have on in almost all my pieces. I'm still laughing about that PaperMate ending... lol. Great collab.

Artificial Intelligence, undeniable dopeness

pz... AI

Programmed For Perfection... All Feedback Is Appreciated... Peace

Good lookz on tha repliez from everyone...They appreciated cuz shit usually getz slept on...But more feedback would be dope...peace

Int much I can say that the others ha'vent the piece was coo I was digggin, i think you called shootgun tho' aimin str8 fo the heart and thangs....nice

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