POST YOUR RHYME WITHIN 1 HOUR AFTER MINES, THIS SHOULD BE A HOT BATTLE
26 LINE LIMIT
FAIR VOTES
NO CREW VOTES
5 VOTES WIN (AS USUAL)
UMM THATS ABOUT IT, I'LL GO 1ST

CHECK IN & ILL POST

chek in..........wuda been better in elite like i said cos there's too many herbs in here but fuck it...........

Heat-spits-leak-quick leave you-speechless..and “put-divine down-your-throat” and let you “breathe-it”/
you prolly “peaced-it” you tried to “cease-it”..but the “win-is-mine” so please just “leave-it”/
i'll take a “rusty-needle” and “inject-my-9-on ya-chest”-just to-see you “rash-up” and “live-off-deseases.../
and watch you-rot” and hope “your-eye-balls-fall-out”, like “acid-made-ya-head-sneeze”/
(acid on the needle.made him rot. his eyes popeed out like his heade sneezed)
your style-is-dead, rehearsed-and-old, fgee couldn't win this battle if he “drove my royce backwards” and “reversed-the-rolls”/
kids winning streaks always revert-and-slow cause his verses-flow with the same consistency of a “pregnant” bitch on “birth-control”/
battling me is like trying to fuck a full fledge-Christian-piece, theres no possible way you'll ever “get-into-me”/
I'll put fgee’s “vertebrae over his eyes”, use it as a blind fold then tell him to “watch-his-back” from me/
leave ya “bars-streched”...this kid get sat on more then a “park-bench”..leave ya vision x-rayed until you're “glance-less/
Imma hollow man but not “face-less”...ya destiny's on “tip of ya tongue” & you still “victoriously-taste~less”/
i'm surprised you showed up to battle, dawg, aren't you still grounded?/
if not, you will be after my “punches” pound your ass to the ground leaving you DUMBFOUNDED/

*SWITCH*
Ill eat you twice, and invite you back for thirds to lose/
Try again and get ate 4 times like 32*/
breakfast is the most important meal, and you aint shyt so im eatin your act for lunch/
but eatin wack emcees makes me thirsty, “TOO BAD FGEE AINT GOT NO PUNCH!”/
you don't wanna battle G BROOK, you'll “fail” if ya try to test my skills/
FGEE’S dickryding members of The Productions so much, he's beggining to look like their third TEST-TI-CLE!/
your whole style's generic, like it's “drawn” with a stencil/
cause the only time this cat “pops” lead is when he uses “MECHANICAL PENCILS”/
battling me is like “basketball tryouts”, in the end someone's bound to get CUT/
fuck it, battling me is like “chopping your penis off”--“IT'S JUST PLAIN FUCKIN NUTS”/
your just a clown-kid and your raps suck so u besta comence with singing the blues/
cause isn't it depressing how I've only been here for one month and already I GOT MORE TKO'S THAN YOU?/

that wasn't prewritten^^^^^???????yeh right...............
i'll be dropping sometime..........soon............................ ..........

DAT *ISH WAZ HOTT
CANT WAIT 2 CE DA WHOLE BATTLE
HAHA@PRE WRITTEN, I KNO G UNIT BAK FROM KKK SITE N DAT NIGUH AINT KNOWN 4 PRE-WRITTENZ BUT HE DID BEAT ME

That shit was TIGHT. nice punches and flow
check my shit out cuz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=47495

tight ass verse.. please vote on here.... much appriciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5704#post435704

i dont have nothin for you to check out but that was a nice crop, very on point, not something you usually see but good

HOL UP, DUDE SAYIN MY SHIT IS WRITTEN?
HOW YOU GONA SAY SOME BULL SHIT LIKE THAT JUST TO GET OUT OF OUR BATTLE?
I SAID POST IN 1 HOUR...SEE MAN THESE SO CALLED "NICE EMCEES" ON HERE ARE BUNS

TAKE IT AS YOUR PUSSINESS IF YOU DONT SHOW
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this gonna be a double shooting between me and and your avatar/
G-unit u'll join 50 with bullet wounds but u won't live to show the scars/
G u can't turn this battle around cos i just ripped your torso off/
actin all 'cocky' came with his tail between his legs.....that what u call a dick?cough cough
u couldn't top my lyrics if they were a pizza base/
there's food for thought.....wasted on you cos ya heads just storage space/
before you submitted your reply u shoulda done a complete edit/
26 flawed lines......imperfection in your title i'll give u full credit/
i'm S-tickin you down the middle like a $dollar sign free of charge/
split your personality like a schizo.....then leave u charred/
this punk wouldnt PM me at 'MSN'.....cos even my names too hot to 'handle'/
this ships sailed its last voyage.......just entered the bermuda triangle/
rip your tongue leave u speechless......leave communications on run around /
couldn't 'pitch' a decent verse if you slept on 'camping grounds'/
just as well you don't do 'audio'.....cos u'd leave listeners 'sound asleep'/
it's like i'm a veteran janitor....the way i've got a clean sweep/
i'm beating u beastly.....call it 'priestly' the way i'm hittin ya 'organs' with vitality/
there's no 'paper' to sign......but i'm makin this a 'form'-ality/
G tries to act all 'manly' but he's just fallen head over 'heels'/
you won't be walkin away from this battle.....cos i ripped ya achillies and then u squealed/
u coulnd't come sharp in this if it was bball and u were the point man/
comin up dry.......a flow drought this homo got a hose ban/lol
i just strung this dude a rope.........he jumped in the noose and now he's well hung/
the ladies flocked.......left disapointed all cos of a slip of the tongue/
leave u 'left' with 'central' processing failure cos my compute is always 'right'/
flickering like a dull neon bulb your teacher was lyin when he said ur bright/
can't believe i battled some1 that thought u had to be dead to be a ghost writer/
squashing your verse up couldn't help you write tighter/
i had to tear out his heart and replace it with a pace-maker/
even then he wasn't able to keep up to speed.....cos i'm a circuit breaker

he's right, you did go over the limit. this was a nice battle but even with a lil' more i still say g unit took it. He hit harder

shit sorry man..........wasn't really payin attention
i'll edit if you want me to.........................thought it was 30 lines for some reason

THATS YOUR CHOICE MAN, I PLAYED MY PART IN THIS BATTLE
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