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Old 05-17-03, 06:19 PM   #1
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Unhappy "Criminal Minded: A Deathrow Story" featuring RhytemicTendecies

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{RythmicTendicies}
I’m sittin here, spending my last solitary days on-tha-row//
Surrounded by killers, rapists, and generally filthy-shit-gore//
I don’t wanna be here no more, I wanna go back home//
But since the age-of-four, I’ve dreamed of the father I’ve never known//
This 10 ton burden on my back I’m towin, all my appeals are gone//
My only chance is to start clawin through these walls, laywer isn’t carin//
People say when I die, it’s just clear sailin’, but not for my malevolence
soul//
When their done, my white ass will be as black as coal, it’s-already-over//
I’m gonna need more than a 3-leaf-clover, you think things’d-be-different/
If I’d woken up that-moring-sober, bit I guess I’m just keepin’//
The justice-system-efficient, wish I though 2 fuck’s was sufficient//

{Withersman}
Murder was the case that they gave me//
My lawyer said, "Sorry Mr. Withers but I can't bring you to safety"//
I couldn't believe what I heard//
I knew sooner or later I would see Satan and not the heavenly birds//
I'm the man who's been neglected all his life//
heart filled with hatred, cold, and filled with the desire of strife//
as you can see what drove me to this insanity, I can't believe//
Why did I leave a nigga six feet deep//
Well he came in my face and said, "You gonna get your ass kicked"//
so I pulled out the eagle and left him sleeping in his casket//
there it goes the darkest sin//
the niggas soul is floatin in the atmosphere with the wind//
I've been to jail before but not for this reason//
Now the rest of these killers and billers, fillers will also stop breathin//
in my cell, I'm countdown and calculating//
my remaining days, oh shit there goes my life savings//
I wasn't innocent like Snoop Dogg was found//
instead to the jury I was a notorious bloodhound//
now my life is in jeapordy because of my actions//
I could've walked away instead of killin someone like I was in "Red Faction"//

{RythmicTendicies}
This is it now, no more chance-to-mend//
My mistakes, were getting clos to-the-end//
Forgiveness signals to god, I send//
Hope he’ll tend, to my tortured excruciating wounds//
O shit, this it it, don’t take me now, please!!//

{Withersman}
No man!! They can't take me away!!//
The governer will call, please just a few more days//
I'm sorry for what I did. I SAID I'M SORRY FOR WHAT I DID!!//
I never realised how emotional it gets when it comes to the end//
Makaveli said, "I aint a killer but don't push me"//
THE MUTHA FUCKA WAS GONNA KILL ME//
I'm strapped in this chair it's too late//
The family's giving me the finger wow that's great//
Okay tears are running down my cheeks how?//
it's too late you can go on and pull the switch now//

(Electric buzzing)

-Done-

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Old 05-17-03, 06:25 PM   #2
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Tha topic of this drop remined me of Snoop dogg's "Murda was tha case that they gave me" , , , and 2pac's "2 of amerikaz most wanted" , , , , ,Withersman Blazed it as alwayz , ,, rhymeictendicies also came out vicious , , Lines were onpoint , , , overall Ill drop ,, and ya all get a 9/10 , , ,,
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Old 05-17-03, 07:49 PM   #3
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Aight thanks dawg UPPIN PEOPLE!!!!!!
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Old 05-17-03, 08:49 PM   #4
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Hey man that was dope as fuck.Keep writin' kid.
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Old 05-17-03, 09:09 PM   #5
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thanx dawg. UPPIN
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Old 05-17-03, 09:21 PM   #6
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holly shit this was hype Withersman i like your style the first line you spit that was ill the safty shit

nice post i love what ya'll doing with the crew thing
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Old 05-17-03, 09:41 PM   #7
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lol thanx dawg UPPIN!
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Old 05-17-03, 09:58 PM   #8
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yo that shit was hot. both emcees deserve 2 thumbs up
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Old 05-17-03, 10:10 PM   #9
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thanx Dawg uppin!!!!
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Old 05-18-03, 12:36 AM   #10
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YO CHECK THIS YALL!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-18-03, 12:42 AM   #11
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dat was hot i was really feelin it....................i would like ta hear it ova a beat.....................
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Old 05-18-03, 12:45 AM   #12
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thanx dawg
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Old 05-18-03, 05:53 AM   #13
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Old 05-18-03, 11:29 AM   #14
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UPPIN FOR VIEWS AND OPINIONS!!!!!!!
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Old 05-18-03, 01:56 PM   #15
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UPPIN FOR OPINIONS!!!!!!
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