ok here it is, finally got it up right.................ill post mine then u post ur verse again....

here ya go...

Listen up, you are now on Xtra Terrestrials turf
If you dont get off, ima smack you like your a smurf
I see this is your first battle, well you picked the wrong opponent
Cause the chances of you beating me, is the chances of a cop not eatin a donut
You made a mistake accepting my challenge for a battle
Wanna know how bad think of it this way, your gonna get beat like on halloween with a paddle
This is too easy, I murder countless MC's, its like my rhymes is Genocide
Pretty soon I'll be called SARS, cause my rhymes will be feared wordwide
Dont feel bad when your first lost gets recorded and you become 0-1
Look who your battling, its the champ, I do shit like that for fun
And can I ask you what kind of battle name is Jambo182
Well, I can tell u suck, you aint even in a crew
Your probobly one of them kids who try to act black, sayin that you like 50 cent
But when people ask you what that is, you say its the amount of money you just spent
Fuckin goofy basterd, I bet your favorite movie is Harry Potter
And when you go to a weightroom, your so weak you cant even be a spotter
So dont even bother responding with some weak ass diss
Cause even you know, theres no way in hell you toppin this

GL kid

that verse is clean as hell. that shit was tight



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DIPSET MOTHERFUCKER!!

wow u turned up for this battle........someone has used this line before in the exact wording

Cause the chances of you beating me, is the chances of a cop not eatin a donut

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yo really???? i never seen anyone use it before...... my fault if it has been, i wasnt biting nothin.......jambo wheres ur verse at??

YO THIS IS JAMBOS VERSE, HES NOT ONLINE SO IM POSTING IT FOR HIM


Let me call u ET for short...im'a make ur mind short circuit
battlin me u risked it...u wanted to win but u only missed it
like a fist hit....im knocking u out and leavin ur face scarred and bruised
You aint no fuckin rapper ur a bitch with no boobs
Like the weed im a choke ya...roll ya up and smoke ya
Ur rhyme was for fun right? how about a gun fight that'll certainly not joke ya
ET...............talkin like aliens exist
he be..........the next victim of my diss list
I do more than top his shit i sit a cherry on top
ur rhyme so bad i think u got shitty lyrics mixed up with hip hop
talkin shit bout harry potter...well let me cast my spell over u
i aint in a crew but fuck it ..who in the right mind would team up with u
this post should be sticky to show how badly i defeat u
this battle wasnt tricky..lets stick this ..wheres the glue?
just coz im new here dont mean im gonna lose
who the hell let this wack ass emcee on the loose?
so fuck it vote now me or extra terrestrial
ill be gettin the vote this time..coz im the only one here with potential


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can we get some votes....ill return the favor and vote on your battles if we get some votes...............................

xtra hsa beter rhymes and material
my vote-xtra

return the favor pleas

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51359



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Both were pretty good but X-tra had the better metaphores and all that shit. His also had better flow. Both were good but I'd go with X-tra if I could vote. Check out LowRolla vs. Herbivore

xtra t was better that was pretty tight and funny good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

ok thanks to those who voted, zig ill check out ur battle soon, and uppin for more votes.......................

hey man check this one out instead dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51010

yo can we get some votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????

yo can we get some votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????