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I liked it, it wasnt to poetic like that one person said and it was far from gangsta in anyway. Its kinda dull how poeple use that nowdays, but back to the topic it was and ill drop like all the others i have read from you. Good job.

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nice piece inspire.
you already said it was about past thoughts, but I really could've sworn you'd watched a MASH movie and Finding Neemo in the same day lol.
anyways, this had dope wordplay, and a really good flow that had nothing to do with bar length. It made me think...ocean...thoughts....swimming....sperm..... heh
meh, this was nice, keep em comin. and kill that murder glok dude.
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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

its about past thoughts and subconcious and dreamy ness and shit...i guess.


arent i clever?...yes.
lmao@ murda Glock..oh i mean G.L.O.K.K. yeah...keeping it cracka style for all my wife beaters in lockdown wordup...
now thats gangsta...like gary coleman level gangsta...cant b fucked with gangsta...*sighs*...ignorance seems to be in enough quantity the villagers are getting sick of it...

Beatiful imagery mayn..

if you don't understand this, you must be stupid..

but on the real..im loving the concept of this...

deep..

lol i havent seen finding nemo... isnt out here yet but i'll be sleeping on the sidewalk to get tickets before opening night

thanks to the last 3 people who replied... you comments are noted... finally some vets get up in this... lol...

Definitly agree with Trill add a hook to it and definitly worthy of RB legends, keep it up dawg

^^^thanks... uppin one last time....