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where was love’s AIM... i was caught in a WEB of emotion-
with no love to take back... i tried but was denied to push in a forwad motion-
commotion....my brain couldnt sustain-with images like picture frames decorating my past reflections in pain-tears flew like rain-love withdrew like iraq when america came-
sitting alone-to an empty home-camped by the phone-waking up every hour to answer only a dial tone-

PLEDGE
A sat there listenin to the fone cry with pain
rise to ma feet see callers ID wit yo name
Sit back down hands over ma ears trying to block out the screams I knew I don’t deserve you
The best thing for me to do is just leave you alone for someone else who’ll stay true
Ive had it with ma ways with ma life and hurtin people
And I kno that if a answer it youll try to get me back wit you
Truth being that id love to but id just hurt you even more
its best for me to lay lo shut ma mouth and head for the door….im sorry

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couldnt drink the pain away-so it seamed weed was the only way-
snorting lines im trippen talking to myself and your photo on my stereo siplay-
i know it’s fucked up to put yourself under this assault- especielly cause you with he an i ended this but it wasnt my fault-
my life’s slanted- love taken for granted- but you betrayed and slayed me like you planned it-i would of gave you the planet-
gave you the clouds the suns rays- just to here you say- or claim you love me without mistaken mine-for his name-i drew the line-you drew it in rewind-to walk forward leavin me behind-
to a closed door-
driven another way while i sat by the blinds-
trying to convince myself you where a whore-

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When you found me out for cheatin the look upon your face was priceless
Adrenaline rushed thru ma body and my soul just died
I loved you.theres no mistake but what I did cannot be erased
So when you hit me for what I did the physical harm left me motionless and deflated
I couldn’t lookyou in the eye cause I knew you would be cryin
And knowing that I did that to you tricks ma heart and soul into dyin
No excuses can clear ma name so ma mouth remains closed
Ma eyes hit the floor and a walkout..because we are no more

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now truth set in- you were my woarst weapon- my ticket to heaven- on the quest for the legend-that verb- the L word- but you through an AB- cause no L~OVE you thought you were AB~OVE me-
now it seams the only prize to love denied-is that no one will miss me for suicide-
and i know it god forgive but im destined for hell- of the tortures life bring none woarse than being by yourself

PLEDGE
I pray that every night that you found something that made you see
Truth being that you never put time and effort into loving me
That’s why a strayed and left you all alone that eventfull night
I was upset and needed comforting…I cheated out of spite
But you weren’t caring bout me n e more just thought I was a whore
You seen loving me and comforting me like a household chore
I was an person not an object but you didn’t realise until
I crept behind your back and made you realise I was your girl
Not your play thing or your punchbag but your soul mate who you love
Its too late now for reasoning wit me cause your looking down at me from above………Im sorry

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as i said i trusted you and you came through

THAT WAS HOT

and you to......uyppin this shit lets get some opinions

pledge very hot there...word keepin the vocab complex.
Nearly brung a tear to my eyeBLAH... great depth

thanks uppin!!!!!!!!

that was a dope story.... liked how you each feed off each other a little........

THANX PAR IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED BUT SHE REALLY PUT THIS TOGEATHER SHE DID GREAT

this was really quite good. an amazing collaborate.
WP, your rhyme scheme and style is really different, a refreshing change.
Pledge, your stuff is always good, but your last verse in this was pure dopeness.
Really nice piece....almost as hot a pledges sig lol
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

damn SICK COLLABO.................YO SOME KINDA JAY Z AND BEYONCE...LOL

I LOVED THIS PIECE IT WUS DOPE 4REALZ FAM NICE DROP

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uppin on this shit.......thanks for all the opinions lol am blushin

pledge an word that was dope i havnt seen a gd collab in a ages..........

Nice yo..

it had an intresting story...

YO WE HAVE TO BRING THIS BACK MA