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07-02-03, 11:05 PM
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Summer. .
IP: 2DFF 5E3E
SuMMeR.
Heavenly blue skies, parties thrown by a host got Girls and Budweiser, im taking the Tops off both. Guys showboat and flex, As sweat forms and grows - The suns rays leave 'em with Red Necks like Country folk. Whats funny though, is people dont get why its my faverite season theres blondes in bikini's - Geez!, do i need more of a reason?! Suns keeping em tanned, their in need of something cold but if they dont like Ice Cream, well. . i'll let 'em lick my Cone. Back home, having water fights with watering cans Summers the season of youth, enjoy it while you can. |
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07-02-03, 11:07 PM
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IP: AED3 16C8
Ya, this piece a'ight...7/10... hey yo, dawg, could u check my Opens?
"Real Life"-Gangsta One "Go Gangsta on the Bitch"- Gangsta One Yo feedback wou' be apprecieted...thx. |
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07-02-03, 11:29 PM
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Will Do. .
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07-03-03, 03:20 PM
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IP: 965F B19F
Blah, You Sloth Ticklers. .
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07-03-03, 03:23 PM
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IP: 1769 3B0F
i think this was good different but a woth reading peace no doubt
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07-03-03, 06:30 PM
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IP: 1D62 B5F0
haha...dope shit bro....a typical UK summer......i think it needed more than 7/10 Gangsta One...!!
what mo can i say Cam....peace..!! |
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07-03-03, 06:45 PM
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IP: 2EE0 0D06
Quote:
Thank You, E Z! |
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07-04-03, 03:25 AM
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Banned for Stupidity
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^ I also liked that line.. lol
This was a good read. A lot better than most of the other pieces in this forum. Kept me entertained and interested. Good job on that.. Smooth flow kept me in it the whole time.. I liked this piece. Stay up.. 1 |
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07-04-03, 04:02 AM
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IP: 1C53 92FE
You came slick on this one... kinda short but definately nice.
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07-04-03, 01:54 PM
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IP: 7073 F878
^ Werd, Cheers For The Indepth Replies, Lol. .
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07-04-03, 10:43 PM
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IP: 03D4 DAFE
diffrent.......but still nice homie. i would give this about a 7.5/10 keep elevatin.
peace |
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07-04-03, 11:30 PM
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IP: 8BEC CACE
yeah this was diffrent
laid back style and shit to it.. remind me of ol' school snoop stay up kid peep my piece feat. rythmic tendicies called 110% remix
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07-04-03, 11:48 PM
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wow.
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[ Word for Word ]
Kevin. Alex. Patrick. John. |
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07-05-03, 08:51 AM
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Tickle My Sloth
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IP: C444 58BC
^ lol.
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07-05-03, 09:02 AM
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IP: 8B14 F717
Decent Drop Dawg, It Flowed Killer, Could Have Used Some More Complex Vocab, But it's Nice To Keep Some Things Simple..You Had Mad Wordplay In Here, Specially The Budwiser Line
Overall: Deserved More Than A 7.8/10! |
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