Rules
Well you wanted 10-15 lines (hope you aint pre-written)
No D/R or Hate votes
Ima ask you a favor, Could you spit first? I got a shitload of things to do, like shower and fuckin chores, but ima hit ya back right after im done, and i gotta run to the store. Otherwise, I would go first. Sorry Dawg.

Just Keep it real


-out-

Nah dawg, i gotta lot a shit to do as well, i'll wait for you to spit first.....I'll be right after..................... jus don't take like 5 hours to drop though.............

imma vote on this.........
in the mean time...hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=vendetta

Checkin this...
Grabbin the Mic, Watch the Personals....
Ima do 5 bars instead...

Beat...

Taktik is a "dirty" spitter around here, so im offerin him a clean- "tictac", you probably aint even black, callin me a nigga and you aint even got a Gat//1

as a matter of fact, he sayin he from a "ghetto", i dont believe that shit, even if he was a "poor" fellow//2

HELLO? The ghetto consists of gats and "nines", damn you wouldnt "fine" even if you did go over the "speed limit" sign, So now im dissin your hood by "crossin the T's and Dottin the I's"//3 (hes from T Dot, look in profile)

You must be out-of-your-"mind", cuz to last here you gotta have the "brains", and not only fit "in" but be "sane"// 4 (insane, Get it?)

Its just so simple and plain, becuz my words come at you with "speed", bitch you aint like me, the only way you make it "high" is if you use "weed"//5



Done.....

wow looked like al ot more when i was writin it, but that is 5 bars, its just all spaced out a lot i guess.....but whatever, that would be ten lines.....I'll fix it...




Taktik is a "dirty" spitter around here, so im offerin him a clean- "tictac", you probably aint even black, callin me a nigga and you aint even got a Gat//1
as a matter of fact, he sayin he from a "ghetto", i dont believe that shit, even if he was a "poor" fellow//2
HELLO? The ghetto consists of gats and "nines", damn you wouldnt "fine" even if you did go over the "speed limit" sign, So now im dissin your hood by "crossin the T's and Dottin the I's"//3 (hes from T Dot, look in profile)
You must be out-of-your-"mind", cuz to last here you gotta have the "brains", and not only fit "in" but be "sane"// 4 (insane, Get it?)
Its just so simple and plain, becuz my words come at you with "speed", bitch you aint like me, the only way you make it "high" is if you use "weed"//5



Done.....

man now it just looks shitty...................oh well, i guesss it doesnst matter what it looksl ike, just check the punches and shit man.......10 lines......whatever........5 bars.......Good enough........Blah, im out......
Check Personals

it looks more like 5 lines...............yo I'm bout to drop my shit now yo................................................ ........good spit

Fatal Executives Representative Presents.........LOOK OUT BELOW

I spit verbs~to~break~herbs, I strait~urge~you~make~sure, that before you make~yours, you learn~to~evade~words//1
Learn to embrace~hurt, verse~after~verse dispurt, you frantically open ya rhyme book, make sure your 'Microsoft "works"'//2(pre-wrote)
My metaphors metamorph to textual dinosaurs, they rip through ya letters like flesh, tearin' up ya 'beef' like rapid carnivores//3
Bleedin~gore, punches make your teeth~no~more, you can't rap 'tuff' you'd need to 'freeze~an~apple' to rap 'hard~CORE'//4
Fatal Executives sworn, wit a mic~n~keys in hand when I was born, i'm 'on-top' of your 'lines' like standing on a 'prisoner~in~uniform'//5(lined shirts??)
This shit I spit is twister~formed, flyin~cows and farms~deformed, this verse like a 'hurricane' here's the i of my 'storm'//6(eye)
you rhymes~a~flop, 'fumble' lines to drop, you wouldn't even get a 'stage~cordinator' to give your rhymes 'props'//7


i wasn't sure if these were either long lines or bars so I just made 7.........let the voting begin

Fatal Executives Representative Presents.........LOOK OUT BELOW

I spit verbs~to~break~herbs, I strait~urge~you~make~sure, that before you make~yours, you learn~to~evade~words//1

Learn to embrace~hurt, verse~after~verse dispurt, you frantically open ya rhyme book, make sure your 'Microsoft "works"'//2(pre-wrote)

My metaphors metamorph to textual dinosaurs, they rip through ya letters like flesh, tearin' up ya 'beef' like rapid carnivores//3

Bleedin~gore, punches make your teeth~no~more, you can't rap 'tuff' you'd need to 'freeze~an~apple' to rap 'hard~CORE'//4

Fatal Executives sworn, wit a mic~n~keys in hand when I was born, i'm 'on-top' of your 'lines' like standing on a 'prisoner~in~uniform'//5(lined shirts??)

This shit I spit is twister~formed, flyin~cows and farms~deformed, this verse like a 'hurricane' here's the i of my 'storm'//6(eye)

you rhymes~a~flop, 'fumble' lines to drop, you wouldn't even get a 'stage~cordinator' to give your rhymes 'props'//7

here's the spaced version, sorry bout that

taktik gets my vote his rhyming was tight and flowing
Silk your shit was good aswell but didnt flow aswell!!

I vote taktik!!!!!!!!!

Can you guys check out my battles against thugzdocry and deceased, cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice spit man, guesss i just wasnt in the mood to battle.....but yeah whatever...Props....No beef..................

But yo, Pretty good fo a 14 yr old girl right? .................Just keepin it real.....................................

Yeah that was pretty good, regardless if yous a girl or not, femcees can be ill too....................anyways,,,,,,,,,,,,,UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Leave a link, i'll look at ya battles and leave an honest vote.......uppin da votes

im gon have to go with silk on this one homie
that shit was tough this is a tight battle
good luck for both of you
yall should have a round 2 up in this bitch