I Sit On My Doorstep And Observe, They All Appear To be Disturbed Tryin' To Scream...
Bickering Over What They Deserve Kicked To The Curb, Tryin' To Live The American Dream...
Today Doesn't Seem Like Yesterday Or Tomorrow, It's Been Altered In Some Sense...
Full Of Regrets And Sorrow, Souls Arrested Under A False Pretence...
Erase Greed And Deception, Create The Perfect Complexion...
Never Happen, Beauty Is Found In Imperection...
Break The Default Pattern, Oblitterate Comformation...
Jump Through The Rings Of Saturn, Witness The Transformation...
Train Long Enough, Even The Brain Can Be Contolled...
The Path Is Long And Rough, We All Just Want To Hold...
To Love Is Great, But To Be Loved Back Is Even Greater...
Amazed At What 2 Souls Can Create, To Love For One To Must You Cater...
What Will You Do For Something Theoretical? It's Mainsteam Feeding The Core...
Stuck In Questions Hypothetical, Todays World Has Become A Bore...
Predictions Easily Made, What's New, Hip, Original Has Already Been Done...
Feeling Betrayed, Carrying The Weights Of Guilt, Over One Ton...
In Pursuit Of False Hopes, Chasing After False Idols...
Greeting The Pope, Looking For The Answer In The Bible...
Perhaps Love, God, Greed, Hope And Deceit Don't Exist...
Teach The Kids From An Early Age Not To Resist, Make A Fist...
On Your Quest For False Items, I Watch From Where I Reside...
Take Your Wrongs And Right'em, I'm Going Back Inside...

HOT DROP NEEDS SOME BRUSH UP BUT THIS WAS HOT

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I like that.....

Nice Piece homie........

pretty deep....

Something About Love And Other Feelings... Kinda Hard To Explain... But Umm... Say If You Hadn't Ever Met Your Wife... And You Married Someone Else... And You Tell Your Wife That You Love Her But In Your Other Life You Love Someone Else... So How Do You Know That You Love Is True... And About How People Love Cause It's The Cool Thing To Do... Glorified By TV And Such... Blah... It's Almost Midnight... You Figure It Out...

Teach The Kids From An Early Age Not To Resist, Make A Fist...
On Your Quest For False Items, I Watch From Where I Reside...
Take Your Wrongs And Right'em, I'm Going Back Inside...

^^That Ender Was Tight...You Lost Me In Some Points But Overall Its Pretty Tight..Keep Bringin Tha Gemz Mun...Pz....

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hey man,nice piece I liked ya multies alot (not only makin the last words rhyme) and ya made sense.Ya kno how to use Vocab as well,good.Stay ^
-Avi

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that was a nice drop much props

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Hot stuff, loved the ending
was a good element of complexity in there aswell

nice v.enjoyable to read

-pz

I think dat if da structure wuz neater...in a cleaner bar 4mat den dis might b a legend...4 real....it's sum real deep shit....mos def felt dat. KEEP DROPPIN!