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this some shit i wrote cause im shippin off the equipment tomorow and am going to be waiting insanely for my pro tools setup to come so......... enjoy
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IP: C9F8 1A33
Beat Is Pretty dope ..
Flow Is Pretty Good, Content Pretty good, Emotion Pretty Good, Delivery Is Good.. Overall Good Track .
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Listenin...Beat Is Dope...Lyrics Are Good...Emotion Is Good...Flowing Well...Done Well...Nice...Pz...
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IP: C1DA C961
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yo that was good like the gun slingers bet...I heard it on the charts.
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IP: C1DA C961
nah i aint down for a crew
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i like it man...its so fucked...ive listened to 3 underground artists in a row and u all sound the same...thats a 1st. Nice flow..ILL BEAT!!
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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really feelin' the beat... "nice" flow.. lol, a little short, but was still on point..
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Since you say your offline and ish I'ma treat you like you was a rapper trying to get a fanbase.
THe beat is nice that's always a good thing BUT your delivery is shakey and for a emcee that does shows and drops radio edits that's a no no. Make better useage of your adlibs; this can make or break a track. |
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