10-20 lines
Crew votes.
No hate, d/r votes.
You are dropping first.
Let's see if I am good enough for the crew.

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Verses are do by 3:30 Eastern Time, which is and Hour from now almost, so that is the time.
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You have 10 minutes to go dude, so please don't get past the limit, winning like that isant cool at all.

Lines ruler written, u still dont spit straight, c u you down 4 da count without fangs and a big cape........
Cuz you couldn't commit verbal rape on dates..if you had lady, a mic and your best mix tape....

In whirlpools of sewage u wudnt find suck-cess.. so just sink to the bottom n let your shit rest...
Your shits stressed, streched like 501-s, _evi's - see when it comes to L's i owe you one......

I know your wrong you aint 'ambitious', infact your drops flop n restin where the fish-is.....
Submerged vicious for being so slack, wit ure newbie attacks vs thinktank how wack is that.....

Face the facts, meet hawkings - y'all cant throw punches, cuz u only pot beef when eatin ya school lunches........
I make crucnches when i cream his corn, feed him thorns and make him rip shit up, get his colon torn....

If you werent born, you wouldve neva seen a pussy, and you'dve only played dope lines if youd been a hussy...
Cuss me? No, Take the ink out the pen....cuz bombs over SanFrans wudnt blow more men.....pooof

your post 10 lines

Dude your time is up, what is wrong with you dude? I mean come on, oh well I guess that means you lose, so I will get votes in here. I will wait until 4:30 and if you aint here your done.

Alright good I thought that you were going to back out or sometihng, I will spit in a minute...
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rite on time..............
post up slacker..............
god luck....................
hope ure in VR

He was never the type to play with a stick and a hockey puck/
He was the type to say "Fuck the Stanley cup, I’d rather play in Stanley's Cup!"/
Bend over and let a bullet hit your prostate/
I can just see your blood starting to Coagulate/
Causing you to Exasperate And hyperventilate/
As the bullets of my scripture penetrate making your ass Incinerate/
Blood flows stiff like turds, using Kaopectate/
…it must be hard to rhyme for goodness sake!/
It’s time to liquefy your internal organs and rupture your blood veins/
Cause translucent raps today seem to be all the same/
I leave flaws in your brain, blaze at you with twin pistols/
That leaves you shattered worse than a vase made of thin crystal/
I loaded fifty shells in the clips and they itch to burst/
And just a couple lines is enough to eclipse your verse/
I spark you with more precision than pyrotechnic technicians/
Check this rendition, it's like a bomb that wrecks on ignition/
Your soul seperates from the body, up with the birds/
So you can think of this as a verse of uplifting words/
Watch how your bars get youthanized /
And how I step onto the podium to receive my prize/

Wow that was probably one of my worst spits, just wasent feeling it today, but hey maybe the people will like it better thne I did.

Lets see how the votes go......
People hate me at the moment, lol.....
So u'll probably win........
UPPIN.............

I put no hate votes so they can't hate vote in here, they got to explain if they do, so it doesent matter to me, hate votes are not accepted.

Flow: Slacker
Punches: Slacker
Complexity and Vocbulary: Slacker (ya had sum words i didnt even know lol)
Meta's: Both
Similies: Both
Creativity: Both

Nice battle but Slacker had ILL shit,
Yo slacker please his this up dawg, and read my Second verse its longer than the first

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2

Thanks for the vote, so lets get some more votes in here, drop your links and then I will vote on your battles, don't worry I will.

MMMmmm, shenanegans going on..........
Only honest votes.....no exchange votes....
Ive lost once already cuz of tht