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08-22-03, 01:22 AM | #1 | ||||||
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ok this is my first drop on here...and my first audio drop in about 4 months...
be honest, but dont comment on the quality...this is the unmastered version http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/a2zmusic.htm song is called "? rough & low" if you really feel like breaking it down do it like this 1. flow 2. delivery 3. lyrics 4. hook 5. anything else right/wrong 6. overall Last edited by A2Z : 08-22-03 at 01:41 AM. |
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08-22-03, 05:10 AM | #2 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Flow = Ok
Delivery = Poor Man...Emotionless...Just Gotta Keep At It...Keep Practising...And This Will Evolve... Lyrics = Average Hook = Poor Quality Was Actually Ok...Beat Was Dope...But Yeah Your Emotion And Delivery Was Just Dull And Boring....Work On It...Pz...
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08-22-03, 08:10 AM | #3 | ||||||
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hhmm, I actualy think you had the right amount of energy, or close to it, the mix down is just not good. Like you flow, style and scheme, definetly diff. Im feelin it and if it was mixed down a lil betta id prolly bump dis ish for my homie's.
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08-22-03, 04:56 PM | #4 | ||||||
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i made the beat
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08-22-03, 07:40 PM | #5 | |||||||
...Fuck With That!
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why are u whispering?
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08-22-03, 09:47 PM | #6 | ||||||
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^^lol...sorry i rap in a low voice...im gonna redo this song with everything u guys caid to change
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08-23-03, 12:53 AM | #7 | ||||||
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flow is ok, but your energy is garbage....when you rappin, show love to wat you doing dawg, you sound like you tired and just trying to get shit done...take your time, and pick up your voice.....delivery was off....wasn't feelin the beat at all...drums on it was weak.....ummm i think if you put more emotion into this, and work on your deliver, it'll be a bit better....but it takes practice....stay up tho.....OnE
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08-24-03, 02:07 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Word man , His voice almost put me too sleep , he raps dull , like he wasnt into the song , Like he was tired or sumthin ................................................
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08-24-03, 03:23 PM | #10 | ||||||
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yo i felt da song juss needs to be waaaaaay louder... its like blah blah BLAH blah blah blaH blAH yuh feel me? otha then that... nice 1BoUnC3
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