RULEZ

3 barz
well explained votes plz
no hate d/r or crew votes
Only poll counts...duh!
Good luck.
7 min time limit

Ryu the Illest?. even the sig figure.... seemz constipated-
7 minute time limit..Ill leave it easy for Stan...uncomplicated-
Simple defeat granted sorry kid but this aint like the movies-
like A to C fighting for some space..Im crushing all New-B's-
so with head down and ya measly notepad under ya arm-
I hope i didnt bring down hopes and cause ya feelings no harm-

iMA SPIT ON THIS KID....AND NO FEEDIN!!!

**Picks up mic**

[align=center]>>STARTER<<

if beatin u was a ''whitney drug tactic'' Ryu is quick to KICK DA HABIT/
leave ya spitz endin tragic, u gettin RAN THRU like ''subway prositutes'' MIXED IN TRAFFIC//~1

>>HANGIN<<

You a ''small pawn''on da board nigga PLAY YA PART, if beatin u was a ''MasterPiece'' im here to SLAY DA ART/
my shit alone is a ''prodigy'' bitch ACKNOWLEDGE ME,u beatin me is like ''retards'' gettin in COLLEGE FREE...~2

>>FINISHER<<

I 'Bust-Lips' and leave D-Ranged with a 'Fast-Lisp'... You could 'Hold-my-Mucas' and still not 'Grasp-Spits'!! Stop crying im 'Past-Fits'... Like 'Proving-your-Smarts' I 'Last-Wits~3'...!!

**Drops Mic**

just a lil something....uppin 4 urs

Uppin on this plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

Pretty good battle considerin ya'll both newbies.....But overall I gotta vote for deranged, he had nice wordplay plus his punches were short & 2 the point.......Ryu U had some good bars but extended lines really fucked up ya flow......good battle props to both................

Vote = D-Ranged

Just more everything by Ryu...

Much deffer wordplay.

Harder punches.

D-Ranged had a great opener avatar diss...
And a great line about the "crushing b's"

But that was about it.

Don't know about the 7 minute rule, but ok...

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Whatever Ice didnt really read the battle w/e though...uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

uppin this right here for some votes man even front lines gets slept on like a mofo.....so im uppin for my first time....up

2nd upper for this slept on event damn these fuckers...up up up up up up up up up up up up second second secodn seodnsodnonwoupper

D-Ranged took this battle...Multies, punches, metas, flow....everything was on point..........................

FUCK! I messed up...I got ur names mixed up, shit.............................................. ............................

Vote bein taken away and given to no one... he doesn't even know who he's voting for...
-Amby

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/for...hp?s=&forumid=6 range check in are battle hoe

canwe get some feedback on thisplz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can we get feedback on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!