1 stolen car...2 counts of larceny...
3 monthz probation...4 niggaz in the car with me...
5 days in the same clothez...6 stolen pocketbooks...
7 yearz in the state pen for my nigga...
steal ya 6 if you say I'm not a crook...
5 credit cardz...only 4 non-expired...
3 pairz of kicks...2 more outfits for my attire...
1 empty purse...2 days without food...
3 dayz later caught beef...got jumped by 4 dudez...
stick up kidz 5 dayz a week...the 6th day we'd rest...
goin' through this drama...had got me all depressed...
7 nights in a car...8 nights on the beach...
6 nights in a hotel...5 nights on the streets...
4 jury dutiez...only 3 I had served...
2 trialz to convict me...1 day before the day of my birth...
2 dayz earlier...I admitted that I was at fault...
if trial was 1 day later...I woulda been tried as adult...

this was the story of the last time I got arrested...my teen court trial was a day before my 18th birthday...so I got off lucky...one of my niggaz who wasn't a minor at the time got 7 yearz for violating probation on that case...

uppin'...

nice number concept
i liked it it was different and tight as hell you fallowed the idea all te way tight drop manito

thanks dunny... amor de rey...lol...

^^^I'm the fuckin' Latin King of Thievez...lol...yup...

very nice, enjoyable, original, and nicely worded, we got the two best open mic people in THE OMENS lol, word perfect and king of thieves lol

^^^yup...we up there...but I don't know if we THE best...we still got people like Camarac and Sureal that are madd good at Open Mics...but since I heard that Sureal left... ...Cam if ya see this...I think ya should join Omenz ya fuckin' hoebag...lol

Definetely a nice drop

i like da numbering shit

nice flow to it, like da concept

ill shit holmes


keep em coming

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thanks family...

it's a short little story... nothing too interesting...
But that way you structured it witht the numbers kept me reading... I was feeling that, no doubt...
flow was aight, wordplay was cool....
Descent piece dawg....

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i liked this shit but it reminded me of nas shoot em up 2 much

^^^nah...it's 2 completely different flowz...and the story is different...also in "shoot em Up" Nas didn't stick with it...only the first coupla linez were counting...so it's a completely different concept altogether...the only thing that's similar is that we both used numberz...but I kept the numberz going up and back down...mostly in order but there was one time when the numberz weren't exactly in numerical order...but that was kinda an accident...cause this was off the dome...

uppin'...

nice drop,this shit was ill,good vocab,good story,stayed on point, nice rhyme scheme, laid out nice,and tight concept most def. not played,keep spittin tha illness.~1~