stars are rainbows and mountains are clouds
fountains of shrowds are passin the crowds
put the glass to the ground, consider relativity
was it fists? or just my own thoughts hittin me.

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yo although it was short i think this piece was quite good...
i liked the flow i would like to c this piece expanded on...
8/10
yo plz return the favour...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82929

umm yea, real short
flow was there
everything was fine, you had no time to mess up

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=83050

that was hella short in fact i beat my reply is probably longer than your whole peice
it had more of a poetic vibe to it it seemed to me

but it also seemed as if you were serious
the main word was relativity
and your peice was based off that

if you could peep on of the links in my sig

you are all idiots. =)

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and trust me i pride myself on that

you kno?


kinda of a good feeling in the morning to wake up and say HEY SHAYNEA your an IDIOT

cool. i should ban you.

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yes you should banning me for no apparant reason would really make it all better

GREAT PEICE!

you should stop freeposting.
and stop being an idiot =)

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hazy b said.



and you should blow me.

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yea this is a bit too short to judge,
like i fell like this is goin somewhere
but 4 lines i dunno i just cant make
anything outta it, flow was on point
but i really cant make much outta 4 lines
it seems alrite, but bah just i dunno
if this is a snippit from some of your work
or if you only wrote 4 lines to this paticular
topic, like your abstractness, style was good.

bah slack reply can realyl make much outta 4 lines .............................................

reutrn the favor pl

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82918

nice four lines if there was a point to it...
seriously i kinda got what u were saying in this but whats the point?
for what it was i liked it but..bah
write a proper verse...and read mine

LOL yo tha shit was good but four lines dawg,it's a whate i woulda extended it and posted it later and maybe it woulda been dope.

Peace

woz just gettin into it, then you stopped da spit
wots gion on with it, should expand a bit...............

peace............................................. ...................
.................................................. ................aight