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11-02-03, 11:13 AM | #31 | |||||||
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We need votes in my battle verse Edicius.
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11-03-03, 01:47 PM | #32 | ||||
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Got Cha
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11-03-03, 01:47 PM | #33 | ||||||
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youre all a bunch of herbs, smelly bitch ass little turds, kick youre asses to the curbs, while im smokin on my herbs, never chokin on my words, i speak my mind while youre messages are blurred, and that shits obsurd it should never be heard...nucka..
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11-03-03, 02:22 PM | #34 | ||||
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^^ Dushe Bag Of The Month Award
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11-03-03, 03:56 PM | #35 | ||||||
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chrit - i liked the 3 points of view, it shows you are open minded and creative,
you were consistent throughout the whole piece, nice easy to follow rhymescheme, but it was a bit simple, interesting vocab, the ideas you used were really good for example, So forget your holy book... Implausable... A virgin had a boy?.... The Bible's sold? How is that for hypocracy.... Overall good piece, Auspicious- this was a real emotional piece, Good story telling, This was more complex, The flow was hard to get at first, But after a while I got in to it, Good imagery, and very descriptive, I really got into this, Only thing it could of done without was the hook, Kinda weakened it but still good job, Overall this was much closer than I thought it would be, Both had strong points, But overall auspicious just gets this, Slightly better, Vote=auspicious |
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11-03-03, 07:35 PM | #36 | ||||
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7-5
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11-03-03, 11:43 PM | #37 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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Auspicious Wins.
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