10 lines blind drop......
30 mins after check in.......
normal rules.....

im here fuck prewrittin bullshit. check in right now, .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

deva battled me, and my whispers made his ear explode
i pumped him with so much fear, his heart beats in Morse code
he couldn’t let it go, he wanted to battle me, and got put to rest
i cut his throat and gave him a red neck, like Jerry springer guests
i was bizzy pulling flesh of his bones, i’m sick of bitches
i went crazy on this lazy kid, now he’s out of wishes
this bitch wanted to battle me? finally i get to laugh
your a waste of time. like pinocho taking a polygraph
in fact i went soft, this was just some wasted time spent
next time ill burn your head to ash, like the first day of lent

took 7 mins, im going to bed now, so drop your verse. im not going to wait all day i know your on................................................ .................................................. .......

This kid El Veterano, like mecano ill break em down
Rebuild this 18 [years] to 15cm like his nob not active, cut crown [circumcised]
He Im’d me beef’n like a steak without a bone left all alone
Enter the zone with a woman’s tone, cos an alias wont bring it fuckin home
EL sounds like Spanish so what does this wak slack shit mean
‘E’asy ‘L’oss the weak matador im the bull gonna turn you green
lean like an African queen floating on the river deemed
sunken ships like no other eating the other members cream
the unclean says hes 6 foot 4 tall, aint shit, the heavier, more they fall
ya bulk is useless, heard better lyrics from Shaun fuckin Paul
he wont give me his real name, his user from the start
needs an alias, hes that shit, to get a win cos he aint that smart

yo Deva Took this and heres Why

Flow-Deva
Structure-El Veterano
Multis-Deva
punches-Deva i have heard Most ov El Veterano b4
Opener-Deva
Finisher-El Veterano

VoteDeva
yo Deva u should battle People ov your skill level but ova all this was a alright Battle Aiight Peace (v)

Dick Rider... You're Tryin Out For Deva's Crew... This Is A Dick Rider/Crew Vote... Gone... Fuckin Hoe Moe.
-Axe

if i could vote it'd be for vetenero..

best line:
your a waste of time. like pinocho taking a polygraph

i really didn't feel any of ya punches deva. keep at it though

Opener: Vet
Closer: Tie
Punches: Deva
Flow: Vet
Personals: Deva
Winner: Vet
Hit hhis up with an honest vote please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91286

opening - vet...
flow - vet...
punches - tie....
personals - deva....
closer - tie....
overall - el veterano....

You Didn't Poll Vote... Vote Polled
-Axe

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punches: deva
flow: El Veterano
multies: none
personals: deva
enjoyment: deva

vote:deva

gd bbattle

peace

Quoted Vote... Gone
-Axe

upping for people that actually understand what a punchline is.
.................................................. .................................................. ..fuckin newbies, lol

Yeah, i thought Veterino got this one too - Jerry Springer / Red Neck line was decent, Pinocchio one was ok, he had waaaaaaay better concepts, just needs to word them better for harder hitting effect when read. Decent battle, but my votes with El Veterino.

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