Vote=5hifty
better punches that hit way harder...........yo that verse was dope.....................that was a nice battle yo

good battle here. i liked it cuz it had to differen styles....both of their structures were pretty fucked up.............but 13 got it together after the beginnin, i just cant feel the verse 5hifty when its like a paragraph.....flow was almost even....13's lines were a little too long i think....

5's punches hit hard....but 13's punches hit hard and had wordplay.....

i think i'd give it to 13 if i could vote

yo 13 your shit waz to komplex man, like if u were to spit dat ova a mik people wouda been lost, but all in all u did have good wordplay.... but 5hift kuz, u got strait to da point and your rite dat waz a merkin verse fo sho...my vote=5hift... keep it krakin yo.

Damn this mother really did break it down to a T

Yea man 13, dat was wayyyy too complex lol. Like no offense man, but dis aint "NASA freestyle battles". Dont mean 2 diss ya der but stressin the point. 5hifty, i did expect more from ya but u put out enough to earn urself my vote.

Vote- 5hifty


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i wouldn't say 5hifty murdered XiiV...but he did have a much better structure, flow, and punches....XiiV u battle like a head from HHD...it don't work here.....u had some senseless wordplay....for example...

^^didn't make sense and was pointless....

^^this is what's called FORCED wordplay....it makes some sense...but it's pointless and irrelevant to what ur doing...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - XiiV
Metas - Tie (XiiV had some senseless ones)
Wordplay - Tie (same as above)
Personals - Neither (none of u threw a direct punch)
Punches - 5hifty (hit harder and made more sense)
Vocab - XiiV
Flow - 5hifty
Creativity - Tie
Complexity - XiiV
Structure - 5hifty
RhymeScheme - 5hifty
Overall - 5hifty only gets this because XiiV had some pointless lines and forced wordplay...don't get me wrong...some of them were tight....but 5hifty had a more understandable and harder approach....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

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