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Old 12-07-03, 12:20 AM   #1
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Get Down,Get Low featuring Manet

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96930
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96987
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7688#post967688

Withersman
Manet

BEAT= "Hey Love" by Shaggy

It's Withersman
And that southern girl Manet
Platinum Kliq, D.O.I.
we at it again
y'all can't fuck with us

Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Lyrical Arsonist, the Outlaw blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
{repeat}

Yo I'm slippin, these niggas really got me trippin//
bitch ass niggas in the game is what the bullets is hittin//
cold-hearted, too many people in this world is hatin//
take a puff of that Kamakazi and start hallucinatin//
too wild for the streets, police need to catch me//
cuz if I hear another shot I swear I'm gonna go crazy//
D.O.I., definition of illness, we know how to flow/
world-wide nigga, that is the way to go//
cock it back, the steel's gonna take another life//
thats what you get for gettin this Outlaw involved in da strife//
it won't be one nigga, it will be many men//
I cant help it man, I told you it's in my heart that I must sin//
don't get it twisted, I reall love those gleamy bitches//
like Bonnie and Clyde, except it aint for the riches//
in this world goin by the motto "Survival of the Fittest"//
Lyrical Arsonist just came up and killed this//

Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Lyrical Arsonist, the Outlaw blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
{repeat}

Runnin, money, hungry, all these semis, aint it funny//
how ended up with this girl that looks like she was a playboy bunny//
uh, yo,I'm strugglin harshly everyday//
and all those phony hommie niggas you gonna have to slay//
From Atlanta out her walkin the streets of Philly//
with my nigga Withersman, all yall listeners is about to fell me//


Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Your Southern girl, is right her blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
{repeat}


Now let me introduce the newest addition to the Platinum Kliq, Ayo, Manet go ahead and rip this

Now you wonder how this thuggette got in this bitch//
spittin hot shit as if I were the next Lyrical Arsonist//
let me tell you a few things about myself//
I love to scrap, blast sparks in the dark for my health//
uh, this me, I dont know how else to put it simply//
I'm tryna survive as I live in this insanity//
I love niggas who are bigga and pull triggas//
slayin consinplated and sip on the cold liqua//
I'm fully loaded, clip for clip and I'll show it//
I aint scared to step up to any nigga who try to go for it//
I aint like Kim, That nasty bitch stay talkin about givin head//
instead, I talk about about leavin betrayin niggas dead//
straight out the gutter, blew up, and just got started//
bein the only thugette who's also cold-hearted//
uh, I'm a mix up of J.Lo and Beyonce//
Leavin niggas more fucked up than Da Fonzae// HEY!


Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Your Southern girl, is right her blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Lyrical Arsonist, the Outlaw blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Your Southern girl, is right her blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//
Get Down, get low//
Withersman and Manet about to blaze this show//
Lyrical Arsonist, the Outlaw blazin da mic//
I'm about to rip it up no need to dispite//

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Old 12-07-03, 09:31 AM   #2
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yo why yall sleepin
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Old 12-07-03, 12:03 PM   #3
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Old 12-07-03, 01:25 PM   #4
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This is a nice collab...Witersman repped D.O.I to the fullest , he cameout hard..Manet was also nice but I dont know who she is. She had sum iLL lines. She played with her words and that was really tight....Withersman's content was nice , his structure and rhyme scheme was also hot....The chorus was dope but I wasnt feeling the "Get Down , Get Low" shit. I think thats why people aint reading this collab because the tittle aint standing out. The tittle is simple and weak.

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Old 12-07-03, 01:27 PM   #5
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Thanx mayn, and Manet is a girl dawg. The hook, I dont know what the hell that is lol, it just came up. Anyway, uppin.

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Old 12-07-03, 01:39 PM   #6
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this was a good collabo here, nice piece, wud be good on audio.
i thought the first verse ripped it quality opening verse and the second came off pretty hard to.
good wordplay, vocab, and multi and flow.
overall good piece.
8/10

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Old 12-07-03, 01:52 PM   #7
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good overall song

flowed good, but nothin new

straight wordplay and vocab

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Old 12-07-03, 02:09 PM   #8
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Old 12-07-03, 03:13 PM   #9
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1) Why isnt this called lyrical arsonist
2) Who is Manet......she's really good
3) It flowed really well
4) Vocab was really good
5) Chorus was OK
6) But it wasnt original

Overall dope drop.....would make a really good audio. 8/10
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Old 12-07-03, 03:17 PM   #10
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Sorry for this freepost but I cant understand why Withersman named this collab "Get Down , Get Low"
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Old 12-07-03, 03:51 PM   #11
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LOL I dont know why I named it that. It's not called Lyrical Arsonist cuz I'm the Lyrical Arsonist. It's my nickname in Philly
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Old 12-07-03, 04:57 PM   #12
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Old 12-07-03, 07:27 PM   #13
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Old 12-07-03, 07:30 PM   #14
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dope - i dun understand title either
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Old 12-07-03, 07:43 PM   #15
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I dont understand it either. Just read the lyrics. Uppin
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