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Old 12-11-03, 11:30 AM   #1
Lewd
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aaight thanks for the vote and teh honest opinion........................................... .................................................. ......................................
 
Old 12-11-03, 04:33 PM   #2
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UPPPIN what is takin so long.............................please vote on this battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ..............................
 
Old 12-11-03, 04:50 PM   #3
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Fuck it your both ''jokes''<<
I would ''vote'' But, i dont have 100 ''posts''
Your ''both''soft like Cream of ''oats''
Your rymes Cant ''float'' no "boats''\\
Re typing so shit you allready ''wrote''
You both suck but-D.j 20-you the''Most''
See me on the street Get your |necks| ''broke''\
You'll never get rich ,never Ca$h no |checks| ''yo''
No ''Necklas'' no ''lexus'' No ''sex'' with chicks<X''X''X>
Cus you dick is ''evedence'' that every things not big in ''texas''
 
Old 12-11-03, 06:35 PM   #4
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well thanks for your opinion........................................... .....vote up on this shit please..............................
 
Old 12-12-03, 12:03 AM   #5
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...id have ta say Lewd............................but ya both did it...more on -L- tho............................................... .....................................
 
Old 12-12-03, 04:52 PM   #6
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Lewd:
Too easy,maybe one day I'll make money,went easy on this rhyme
A crime?well it should be,destryed dj-20,defenently no next time!


It lookas tho you were feeding off his verse which is a no-no. Also, you threw in the 'money' part as filler, never made sence with the rest of your verse.

DJ-20:

swing swing whats with the style of hated dont spit words of intensional haten what you goin to createn fat maten in the hoods of ramming bars mooding cars fuedal lives of yo hood could be out of reach for good never could see what goin on for nothing but a secret of a tampon on for youe ronny shon. best can haten for saken shaken cant relate to my haten . now its your turn for this is your first time be scare becuz nothing will ryme take for a crime ride and hide for you wont beat so go take a seat

A word of advice, because it's 'text' you gotta structure your lines/bars better so we get the flow. To many non-important words that ryhme. Try to build a verse around somth'n instead of just ......ryhme'n.

Vote = Lewd
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Old 12-12-03, 05:39 PM   #7
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UPPIN FOR THE LAST TIME VOTE UPPPPPPPPPPP...................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...........
 
Old 12-12-03, 05:49 PM   #8
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UPPIN>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. ...................
 
Old 12-13-03, 09:12 PM   #9
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UPpin vote and end this battle now............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
 
Old 12-13-03, 09:18 PM   #10
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Man Lewd definantly took this one, it was a alrgiht, but i totaly felt lewd, no need to break it down (no hate dj 20) your shit threw down well enough

too bad i don't got enoguh posts, just giving my thoughts
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I have like a ton of votes on this but the fag I'm against doesn't want to loose so he keeps reporting them as d/r's or something so I'm down to 2. So just give me back my rightful votes.

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Old 12-14-03, 03:42 AM   #11
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Lewd won my vote because it's easier to read and rhymes and means what it says better. DJ-20 dosen't get my vote because it's to hard to read, little bit of practice on structure,and learn how to set up flows a little better.


overall=Lewd


good job niggas, straight battle, but not all that.
 
Old 12-14-03, 03:44 AM   #12
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yo i thought lewd on this one but the other guy want far behind. the both had structure and wordplay, but lewd had the flow going !yeaj
 
Old 12-15-03, 05:00 PM   #13
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thanks uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ........................
 
Old 12-15-03, 05:52 PM   #14
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UPPIN............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............
 
Old 12-15-03, 07:11 PM   #15
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UPPIN last time.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........
 
 


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