aiight
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10 lines
i set up
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aiigh

good luck

waitin on your check in................................... this is mine good luck.............................................. ...........

yo are you gonnat check in or is there no point in me keying up a verse............................................. .................................................

Death is on my mind,killin you is the equation,
get u in no time,hittin you wit a lyrical abrasian.
When i spit its so hot you would swear im fuckin cajan,
I hit u with my missiles,this ain't a battle its an invasion.
Your rhymes is wack,infac,you remind of that show Hack,
no reason in particular,u just attract my lines rite through ur back
look behind you bitch!WHACK! ,you just got fuckin trampled,
you know u remind me of that tv show alias.You know the one taht just got CANCELED?

*Hack is a tv show
*alias is a tv show

my bad i didn't see u wanted a check in but i started typin at 12:58...good luck.soory bout that.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

my bad i ment 10 58.....looked at my broken clock............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

using multi sylable metaphors, to create ill punches with not one flaw,
abuse you, till you ask for no more, soon 1-0 my predicted battle score,

i wanna hear no gangsta talk, of you, cos u'd be livin a 'mascerade' like 'wyclef'*,
the only way yous gettin 'shot' is by a news crew, after this verball death,

i spit 'lewd' texts, that no only disrespect in a form thats so complex,
they lead to cardiac arrest so bad splits open the chest, i rhyme to attack and protect,

i got shit so hot, it cause global warmin, and a meltdown all your 'pride',
rippin cats up like 'lions'*, 'lewd'icrissly spit bullets, cause your mom to cry,

congradulations, you've reached it to the 9th line, so far your still alive.
this 'cat' got 9 'lives', away one goes with each line, erase you life wit a 10 line ryhme,




*wyclef, has a song called mascerade

*lions, they live in' pride's

aiight

good luck!!!

this is proabably gonna get slept on................................................ .................... uppin for ist time.......................

second time uppin............................................. .................................................. ...............................

ok battles were close,
both had some good lines in there
but i think lewd got this wit his first 2 lines
"Death is on my mind,killin you is the equation,
get u in no time,hittin you wit a lyrical abrasian."

that was good

vote lewd

thanks.........upppppppin for the first time.
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aiight this be my 3rd time uppin............................................. ..................................................