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Old 04-10-05, 08:31 AM   #1
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The Establishment is Done.

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..L.I. and Flow Intelligent back at again bitches..
..No more ducking GhosT WriTerZ, Establishment faggots..
..Aight Flow, give these hoes what yah got..

The establishment ? Ghost Writerz already made them back down
I just checked your roster and 90% of you are wack now
You act loud. But when approached...Your crew lack pride
Spektikul got red bulls right hand and troop took his backside
Battle ? Its a landslide. None of you could try to test me
And i aint being religious, when i leave ya team blessed B
Its's messy. J Dot thinking he gangtsa, you know its lies
Ill stab a javelin in ya retina just to leave you Poll-For-Eyes'd
What happened? I thought it would be harder dissing these guys
But i'll still put my hands to ya necks like i was fixing your ties
Find a grave to stay. Ghost Writerz are here to save the day
When we spray the guage, the shots'll clock yall chests like flava flav
It's gay to say... That The Establishment is got it on lock down
So just consider RapVerse to be Ghost Writerz block now

..Uh huh...that's right...but we aint done yet...I got something for these ducking motherfuckers too..

The Establishment is wack so expect shit when these dudes speak
They call me Monday through Friday the way I school weaks
I aint even have to diss you guys hard, shit your crews gay enough
Your illest head, Nos, dropped your asses just to come stay with us
Beating these fags outta their top spot til we get plenty of felonies
Cause the only thing you got on us is called straight up jealousy
I’ll go at all your members cause theres just no miss in me
Just like The Black Plague, The Establishment is history
Forsaken what happened you dog, its like you got shot man
Dropped the For from yah name and it was added to gotten
Red Bull, yah weak kid, getting rode all over, we can’t miss that dude
Closest you came to wordplay was becoming an established crew
J DOT you aint hood, your rhymes suck and won’t get sold doc
Thought he was gangster when told he was a chip off the old block
Diabolic, Invektive, L. Veracity, Hoodz Prophet I’m leaving you hurt
You know I’d fucking own your asses with a diss, if I knew who you were
Phat Mic lost his touch, hes gone brain dead, I speak, you shiver
Kid felt my flow and went senile like he peeped the river
Ugly faggots, I’d post yah pics just to cause some laughter
Fucking chumps, yall pose hood more than suburb rappers
L.I. straight up ill, that’s filler, but I’m known for owning whores
Young Blaze is gutter though, after we factor in his bowling scores
We gave yall time to get yah game up, still suck more than twin queers
Premanition still aint bloom, and it’s the second spring he’s been here
The Establishment can keep ducking us yo, after this yah hurt cuz
Shit, you’re the biggest crew with the most people we’ve never heard of

..Now thats how you diss..
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Old 04-10-05, 08:32 AM   #2
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Old 04-10-05, 08:45 AM   #3
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I'm disappointed that I'm not even mentioned in there.

But I gotta admit some stuff made me laugh, I ain't speaking against my crew here, just judging your piece Had some nice punches in there, mad personals and had wordplay on lock. Flow was good as well as vocab in this, both dropped nice. I don't know when we ducked you though, must've missed that so can't speak on it.

Funny shit...

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Old 04-10-05, 08:48 AM   #4
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What happened? I thought it would be harder dissing these guys
But i'll still put my hands to ya necks like i was fixing your ties
Find a grave to stay. Ghost Writerz are here to save the day
When we spray the guage, the shots'll clock yall chests like flava flav

illest bars of the entire drop...nice flava flav line..dam...nice not ta see ma name..cos ya know then it wud b ON!! lol....meh, get at red bull, he in charge of settin up crew battles, dissing us dnt make much difference, u gotta ger Red bullta agree ta battle..1
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Old 04-10-05, 08:52 AM   #5
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Yeah, this was pretty tight. Flow's verse was on-point cept' a few times the flow was off, but it made me laugh. L.I., your verse had nice disses, strong punches but again on one occasion the flow was off-point. Overall though, this is by far the best diss I've read so far on this site.
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Old 04-10-05, 10:04 AM   #6
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shit is aight, some good shit some weak shit,
couple of ok hits but didnt really catch my attention u feel me keep working at it change the front or color or something u know.....

7.0/ decent drop
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Old 04-10-05, 11:09 AM   #7
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weerd GW, yo!! nice job, guys.

Diabolic, Invektive, L. Veracity, Hoodz Prophet I’m leaving you hurt
You know I’d fucking own your asses with a diss, if I knew who you were

^haha nice shit.

Its's messy. J Dot thinking he gangtsa, you know its lies
Ill stab a javelin in ya retina just to leave you Poll-For-Eyes'd

^weerd, fucka J-dot. Does exactlly what the nigga in his sig does.

but good job. pc out. one.
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Old 04-10-05, 11:51 AM   #8
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this was dope!!!!

both y'all laid tha shit out, establishment dissed to pieces...

flow was on point, the vocab was hot and the overall verse was fuckin hilarious!!!

keep doin ya thang!!! pz. 9/10
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Old 04-10-05, 12:07 PM   #9
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shit is aight, some good shit some weak shit,
couple of ok hits but didnt really catch my attention u feel me keep working at it change the front or color or something u know.....

7.0/ decent drop


^lmfao...wow, please dont talk here ever again

anyway...
good fuckin shit i was feelin it a lot...theres like nothin bad really to say i was lovin the wordplay and the disses...just really creative, flow good shit and LI comin back strong lol

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Old 04-10-05, 12:54 PM   #10
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^lol @ tellin' him not to post here again. lol I was like "WTF?" when I read that too. but good shit. GW!!!
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Old 04-10-05, 12:57 PM   #11
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i dont know how cats can downplay this verse..
it was creative as hell.....good job guys..
i liked the polarized wordplay..that was nice......
"i think skep may be able to reply but not sure bout the rest of the crew"
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Old 04-10-05, 01:47 PM   #12
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tight drop,

ya punches easily got the point across, yea wordplay n creatvitiy was tight i was feelin it. Ya strucutre was nice the flow was online n very impressive. Nice drop I enjoyed reading every line.

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Old 04-10-05, 02:49 PM   #13
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Old 04-10-05, 04:29 PM   #14
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You are so lucky you didn't mention me bitch
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On the real though, good diss here, L.I. killed it on this, some bars were weak, others were straight fire... but L.I. , you best hope I don't get you in KORV 2
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Old 04-10-05, 06:33 PM   #15
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haha, shit, im pumped i wasn't in there, though i could easily fit in some of those lines....shit, funny ass verse yo, the only problem i had with it though, was L.I's first bar, which i thought the second line has been done before, everything else was tight
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