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Check in by: 08-27-04 at 03:35 PM

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Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 03:06 PM.

DangerousMyndLunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 03:07 PM.

Ima fuck u bitch. leave your hips displaced...
Merk'd wit haste...left like ur avi..Chalk Traced
Competition...Open faced...like thansgiving re-occured..
I type wit verbs to make your carpal syndrome slur...
And thats word....
Take the space in my lyrics, an smak u wit my space bar...
Verbaly scarr'd,Hoe tried to step up wit skill level'd sub-par
Ripp'd apart...my key's hit in unit's to say u aint smart...
Dangerouse mynd's the kind that trie's.But doesn't make the part...
Scrape up the remain's...Adam's booty, left in Cellulite strand's
Face the facts....your a girl...That's why u have Rapverse fans....

Fuck It Here Goes: ....

The bells ring lets fight i guarantee you a bruiser,
You got as much chance of winning as 'Kobe Bryants acuser',
It's time to blow out your candles as i grant your deathwish,
Like a broken bulb, its lights out for this skeptic,
My words so intense you'll wish your ass was dyslexic,
Cuase then you wouldn't understand only then would i be ineffective,
Your getting buried alive faggot im your undertaker,
Between u and pam anderson tits bitch i can't tell which is faker,
I chopped your faggot ass and bumped heads in the series
But ur fucking whack and hard 2 believe like 2pac coming back theories,

LmfaoO .. * Fucked my shit up!

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Voted For: Malefic

yea, this was a tight battle. But I think Malefic got this.

DML, yea you had the vocab. But you didn't have many good punches that were hard hittin'. The Bryant one was nice though. But yo flow was a lil off too. Vocab was nice though. Try addin' personals wit punches nect time though Tney can be deadly combo.

Mal,
tight stuff. Nice flow in this. It was straight and to the point. You had some nice punches and stuff. Like the closer, was a hot one. Good shit, man. I think you edged out this victory.

Props to both though.

v/Mal

Uppin.

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Voted For: Malefic

v/ Mal

Mal-came harder....good punches and perosnal....nice flow....some made me laugh

DML-blah your punches were played (kobe, pam anderson) dont use sex lines either..........other punches were ok...none hit hard...ok flow.......

o v/ Mal

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Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

damn yo lunatic came hard the flow was hot n tha rhymes was tight to the punchlines were iight vocab need jus a lil werk but its all good
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Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

dml took this...his punches were more clever...they made more sense...had good flow...it was more fun to read...

gave it to dml...

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Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic

yo this niggas lines was nuts mayn that tupac thang he said pam anderson and tha kobe bryant thang he killed that other nigga plus i aint understand where that other nigga was gettin at feel me

retun the favor
peep my open mic
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094

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