REPLIED TO
PR3CISE,TERMZ,YOUNG MIKE,AND CERTIFIED


Whoever dickrides… this guy….must have a fetish for gay rookies-
Or be twice as desperate as a CRAIG MACK’ groupie.
I Spit FRIVeLESSLY, rip chivalry ,with hollow tip delivery-
You swallow dick sem~ON~ly-(SEAMINGLY)
and use my similies to feed silliquies.
you get murdered in the 1st degree with ease-
You’re weak….so act~ing cock~y, for you is like a dick tease.
Real rappers will quote this-fag rapper will deep throat CENTZ-
ITS BEEN DAYS SINCE I POSTED……
im given you a chance to get noticed.
Cause Once my body temp reaches the level that im annoyed-
I spit mansoons and typhoons infected with typhoid.
Use the black void-
in my brain to drain yours when the hallow thoughts deployed.
Im something you should avoid…
the rapper that breaks your finances like being unemployed.
Spitting enough dimes to alter the countries defiset ...
in one session-
Enough dimes to build the projects out of financial recession.
Im sicker then-her and him-the most masculine-
To the most feminen men-rip em-
then rip 4 of U upside down like 2 m’S.
A true martyr-beyond the margin breaking the papers borders-
With bomb lyrics I recycle to use as land mines and mortars.
I place rappers… I erace through more drama then soap operas-
Reverse their carma-leave them in a coma-
Then kill your crew after I burn you using the second hand aroma.
Warning….. smoking me is dangerous-cause the ageless-
Levels of my illness spreads contagious-within the vicinity radius.
Back dated-
to the lands that’s the romans greeks and Spaniards once invaded.
Im like jack the ripper…… throats look like open zippers….
in the trail of victoms I’ve left serraded.
The moses of lyrics leaving m.c.’ seprated-
from they tongues to lunges placement-
all they way to their alphabetical arrangment.
Usen medical manual by issues-
extracting your arteries without damaging your skin tissue-
if you’re a pussy I’ll fist you-
and leave a whole big enough for an elephant dick to fit through.
The Concept is Nuclear…. we contain the brain of a bio chemist-
Highly equivilent with secret societies and deities of academics.
We what the world refuse to belive in-
The origin…the 7th sin-the demons of lymric as told in the book of DJINN.

good drop. needs some spell checkin however. and some lines were a lil stretched. overall. this shit was phat. i would really like to see the reply, especially if it was "PR3CISE,TERMZ,YOUNG MIKE,AND CERTIFIED" all teamed up on wp's ass!!!

word perfect - keep spittin the hits thats, gettin bitches on dicks, and, switchin tit bits for riches

the temp alters when its spitten more like flow to convo instead of a steady rhyme pattern throughout

yo diss wuz sum sickely spitteded shizit! haha
naw dis was tight, da flow an word arrangement wuz hot
and all.
dident really get wat u was tryin 2 say but then again
i dont get my shit most a da time u know wat i mean
haha shit, well um check my shit i jus posted seein as nobody
postisis yet,
peace

just a battle peace

^niice piece though... I was feeling it...

"Warning….. smoking me is dangerous-cause the ageless-
Levels of my illness spreads contagious-within the vicinity radius.
Back dated-" hot lines...

"We what the world refuse to belive in-
The origin…the 7th sin-the demons of lymric as told in the book of DJINN." Niice....

Overall niice piece... keep spittin and elevating...

__________________
Kastaway - Controller of The Dark Realm
History has a bad habit of repeating itself. Learn from the events that took place Within the Gathering of Shadows.....

iight work there nice vocab good dissing and nice flow i was feeling that keep it up id have to rate it about 7.5/10 could have been better if you made it flow and more creatity would have made it aso better bottom line = good work :thumup:

UPPIN THNKS
THE BEAT FOR THIS IS ABSTRACT SO THE FLOW IS OFF IN WRITTEN BUTT O THE BEAT I FORMAT PERFECT MY BOY SAYS I CAN USE HIS EQUIPMENT IM MAKING THIS AN AUDIO FOR THE SITE

packed with good punc lines...vocab wasnt overwhelming...structure was strait......
u jus need 2 even out ya bars a lil mo...
could have been a lil shorter, but hey....sometimes it takes a lil mo 2 get da beef off ya chest
overall it was a good drop...i felt it all the way through...
please return da favor! cats is sleepin on my shit cuz dey dont know me

UPPIN THIS FOR MORE

thought this was decent....a bit boring in places...but..most kept me....i thought it seemed long for 1 verse....but the topic was kept,..overall i seen you do better...but like i said...decent..........pZ twin...

AIGHT

yes once again the format and flow are abstract they fallow the beat itself not a free spit

"You swallow dick sem~ON~ly-(SEAMINGLY)
and use my similies to feed silliquies."

Pretty unique,..nice word ussage..

"The Concept is Nuclear…. we contain the brain of a bio chemist-
Highly equivilent with secret societies and deities of academics."

That was your iLLest line...maybe because you used my name lol... Nah it was because the flow with just that line was very nice..looks like a well thought out line..

Over all was good..
Your flow was definitly on point...
However you must work on your structure...
wordplay was good...work on punches....
Topic wise was a little confused..




Laters...