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08-17-05, 10:14 AM | #1 | |||||||
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New Flames From Diabolic
IP: 3B43 EB4A
yea its like i been away for a minute..but just turn ya speakers up and listen to this...
left feed on.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204358 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204675 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=208058 Track is called Whats That Life Like...its basically about how the life of a signed artist would be.. get at me...
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08-17-05, 11:17 AM | #2 | |||||
Don't Even Think About It
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IP: F15D F66F
Send me this fucking beat...
Aim: Barz Of Steel But anyways... Beat is dope as fuck...Lyrical wise, this is really good, quality is near perfection. Flow kinda slips in a few parts...But overall, you rode this beat really good...Hook is straight..Actually, its dope, Im feeling the hook. I dont know what else to say man. Good job. Send me this beat or I will kill your family
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08-17-05, 11:20 AM | #3 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 428A 4A11
ay im bout to peep this...just gimme a few
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08-17-05, 11:53 AM | #4 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 36C3 7C54
ah'ight.........nice beat choice........common on mixtapes but still solid.......ok flow on 1st is good but the rhyme scheme is very uninspired coulda been more creative with that an the delivery has emotion but not enuff.....then hook comes up....now that takes the emotion up it was koo...but not as catchy as it shoulda been...2nd verse......flow is koo once again the delivery is stronger on this verse....lyrics is decent on both verses but the topic is generic as well as your approach to it, you coulda been more creative an more hype with this but its good enuff to get by as is....overall 7/10......stay up son........1
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08-17-05, 01:24 PM | #5 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
LMAO...the track that started me on my Journey last year
yea I love this beat holy spit! ur flow is good...but I agree with Trip that ur rhyme scheme could come up solid track 1 COllab? rtv please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204656 |
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08-17-05, 08:02 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
aight yall uppin...
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08-17-05, 10:17 PM | #7 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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IP: 392F 648A
beat is nice....my life styles p right?
word flow is on point, lyrics are nice, i think this is a mixtape track word rhyme scheme could switch up, but i'm feeling this...nice keep dropping em hook is catchy.....whats that like, get paid to do me...word
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08-17-05, 10:47 PM | #8 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 7380 6F58
word i peeped this shit on AIM:
quality is dopeness...almost studio lyrics are nice...^word to voke could c this on a mixtape 4shp flow is nice...rhymeechme needs switchin up hook is ctachy as a mofo.. keep em comin dnt keep us waitin another 6mnths 4 a track nigga...1
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08-17-05, 10:51 PM | #9 | |||||
Not_Indeph
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Like I said yesterday. Quality is perfect. The flow didn't go off once if I heard right. Shits funny Cause I was just listenin to that joe budden "So long and goodbye" track where he basically say the exact opposite of what you sayin'. Lol I like this shit and the beat obviously ill. I was spose to be on this but yeah my quality ..__..
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08-17-05, 11:15 PM | #10 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
Solid track man-quality is up, lyrically good, nice flow...liking the hook too, definately mixtape worthy.1
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08-17-05, 11:42 PM | #11 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 73C2 6E35
ahaha i like dis track seriously...got damn boi tha flow was nice imma critical person as alot of u kno but i cant complain about this track.....keep it up...all i gotta say is Vocab is key!! lol keep it up kiddo
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08-18-05, 01:58 AM | #12 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: D6FD 8B82
You got talent man, aint nobody can say different..
I would play this type of stuff to chill to & I can imagine you getting pretty far if you play your cards right in this industry. Just make sure your always moving forward and never let other peoples goals get in the way of achieving your ambitions. As for this song-- Vocals sound good, flow is pro & lyrics worked well enough, personally I dont think being a signed artist would be a stress free life.. But I know where your commin from.. Remember to keep tellin me when you put new shit out cause I'm interested in checking more of ya stuff as its uploaded bro.. Good shit. |
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08-18-05, 03:39 AM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
aight good lookin..uppin
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08-18-05, 10:45 AM | #14 | |||||||
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
u bitches...
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08-18-05, 02:36 PM | #15 | |||||
Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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im feeling it
quality is perfect, we all know that... but weerd its a hot track nice flow throughout the whole thing, couldnt really find any parts it fell off....at least significantly.... hook is kinda coo, but i agree with trip when he said it couldve been more catchy... lyrics is solid, i like the track concept too.... i dont think the beat is that amazing though, but w/e aint a big deal nice shit man, real solid track...
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