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05-23-04, 11:42 AM | #1 | |||||||
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(INTRODUCTION)
Some times we all have a story to tell on how the world looks from our point of view... and this is how i see some of it... (VERSE) YO.. I live my life every day like it was my last how can people survive in the streets? If they eating out of garbage bags. Dam it's so sad. To watch a child eat out of the trash. His mom ain't got a job, and his dad just got out of rehab His aunt came over to watch him but she barely loves him Unless you got cash thats not family she's a thorn in your ass I've seen it hapen to many times not to recognize it. Just put your faith in god, and he'll be there until the sun rises Cant you here the babies crying through all there pain. I wonder where they at. Im only one soldier. but i'll always have your back's Holding you closer. God hold up my shoulders, and give me the strength So they can survive threw this. While i try an take out the dents. Cause every thing comes from within. If its truly from your heart. Join hands and make friends and let's spread this love far Everythings a jar cause hate is alway's partially open A vet with no legs still beg's cause his life seem's hopless His eye's is open, but his tear's still running remembering moments when he fought in vietnam. Now the state dis own him Why would you do such a thing? when he fought for our freedom Now it's against the law for him to ask some body to feed him How could you treat him in such a way knowing the years has been long. He steped on a mine for our sake Then he lost two of his own. The government is wrong They used him Then they took up his youth Why would i join the arm forces? when i know you lying to your troop's (outro) YO This is the leader of soldiers of war. Im hoping you can understand that life has it's ups and downs. Which is why I wrote this. I really dont need your response just read it and think about where we are today compared to yeasterday 1 love and keep hope alive copy righted through ASCCAP 2004
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none Last edited by 5MICMEDALLION : 05-23-04 at 11:57 AM. |
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05-23-04, 09:00 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Words To Live By
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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05-23-04, 09:01 PM | #3 | |||||
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ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...
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05-23-04, 09:26 PM | #4 | |||||
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i was feelin what u was talkin bout, u can work on da structure a lil better but the concept was good even though its been done but it was good stay up
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest |
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05-23-04, 09:48 PM | #5 | |||||||
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I thank you both for your comments
and good looking but da jakah im not sure what you meant by ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate... __________________ South Side Queenz..Holla ......DA Jokah...... But if you would read it instead of just trying to look for rymes You would see that it does. Music is about expression and I feel like Im as good as any one els but If you feel your better you know what you can do home boy i'll be here...first of all Im not a rookie Second of all you just didnt take the time to read it I said I really didnt need a response but i forgot....you only want it to ryme hows this...cat mat hat bat...that sounds about right if ryming is all its about to you so think before you talk most of all read and understrand it first before you judge LIKE I SAID I KEEP IT REAL Im sorry if you take this the wrong way but if you dont thanx for understanding If you do thats your right to feel how you want But im going to always keep it real And young beezy I feel what you said as well but like I said before I keep it real. yes it might have been done before , but not like me because theres only one me making it the only one in the world like it And as far as the structure is concerned we all got our own style thats why God made us all different but thanx fot your thoughts I respect that..1 love Keep hope alive
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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05-23-04, 09:51 PM | #6 | |||||
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aight safe...
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05-24-04, 11:51 AM | #7 | |||||||
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yea dat was gd u haf to elevate by rhymin ur words
elevate- Get betta Homeboy-just sumr andom name ting for like a boi or wateva lol if dat help yo out
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05-24-04, 12:53 PM | #8 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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lol ut oh baby_girl strait thug now she explainin our words and shyt lol j/p u kno i luv ya...but as for the drop... kid work on ur flow wordplay and rhymin...u might even wanan check out that tutorial shyt to teach u some shyt iight....keep elevatin
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05-25-04, 02:18 AM | #9 | |||||||
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I hope your battle is as good as your talking
because your going to need it!!.. Alone with the rest of your little crew '''You telling me to elevate ,but you cant even type shit for me to understand what the fuck you just said......lol.. check your self before checking some on els...aight!
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none Last edited by 5MICMEDALLION : 05-25-04 at 02:22 AM. |
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05-25-04, 02:51 AM | #10 | |||||||
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Look's like the whole ..tell me how to ryme thing
is getting out of hand, so why dont you post against me! and show me how it should be done... as a matter of fact...baby gal can join forces with you so you two can team up and show me how It should be done, because I want to know...no really... I want to know lol,,,,,As if you got what it takes to write the perfect ryme That I dont believe.... none of us are that..... so i dare you to post on me and we'll see who's wack...... and this thing about ryming has got you failing to read the flow..... You only look for rymes...well if you read it ... you will see that it does.....young beezy can join forces with you two.. Plus d jakah...since you all feel you got some thing to show me.... Im not playing at all... Go ahead and post on me and see what you get for it....lol Im glad you think I cant flow or ryme...thats the weakest part about you all.... because you dont know me,,,,,, and yet you taking me litely And im not trying to be the big bad ass but you all seem to be sticking together on this one and I ain't seen you post on no one els but me. So if you want to prove your the best you know what you got to do! da jakah you and young beezy seem to have gotten your turns together on me you say some thing she say some thing stop riding each others dicks and bring whats left of you to the battle grounds and post on me if you all are as dope as you say you are I want you all at once since your riding each others dick's and refuse to leave me alone....I aint going no where so put up or shut up!!!!
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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05-25-04, 09:40 PM | #11 | |||||||
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This is where i was trying to be nice about it.....
but if all of yall notice There together hating on me.....I got more 1 sec
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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05-26-04, 09:33 AM | #12 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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im not hatin im tellin u what u need to work on its called feedback kid but if u wanna get tough then pm me if u wanna battle and i will put ya ass in ya place kid.............
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05-26-04, 09:37 AM | #13 | |||||||
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More Poetic Than Song Lyrics. Nice Though.
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05-26-04, 10:33 AM | #14 | ||||||
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yo nice shit good shit... only thing id be tellin you is not to elevate...? but to make it simpler for us to see your flow... on average we cant hear the beat gonnin on in your head, that it... lyrics cant get much more meaningfull then that....
if i was baby gurl and her lover boy id fear battling you cause you got strong lyrics ... wor up son... hard hitting! LOVE YA'LL WE NEED LOVE YA'LL!
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05-26-04, 01:08 PM | #15 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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ha yo i will merk u (p.o.) and his bitch ass so if yall think ur so fukin good then pm me and i will strait serve ur fagget asses................
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