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06-24-03, 12:12 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Here comes tha critic shit again...
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Look, Im not here to impress whack mc's Im
only hear to rip till ya fall to ya knees// Try goin against sum1 like 2 pac and get off my cock Unless u want my glock to have u bitches on lock// I'll make most of u bitches turn Ashanti and sing or just rip ur ass up like it aint no thing// U say that tha shit i wrote suck but i used that "whack shit" to make ur bitch wanna fuck// I may not be a veteran but I'll tell ur ass off, beat ur ass so fuckin bad it'll make yo lights turn off// I bring the extreme like the "House of Pain" but pack a "Desert Storm" wit me like Im "Paul Cain"// I make niggaz wanna stay "Focus" cause I come and attack brutally like da "White Locust"// But wit this shit Ima rip ya ass until they say "Finish Him" And I aint even here to entertain none of em// So holla at a real nigga dats lookin for drugs dats gangsta to fill any of ya niggaz wit slugs// Niggaz look at me like Im dat nigga "D-Mob" and say that Ima "Bad Boy" like "Black Rob"// IF u wanna sick ass psychopathic schizophrenic motherfucker, then stop bein a titty sucker// And hire this fuckin free agent that'll rip a nigga and make him enter a beauty pageant// Aight Bash and Skiddz get on this shit... I know u will... If u didnt know, if i wanted to write serious, i would but im not takin this too seriously cause its not worth it unless i was gettin paid... plus the more u get on me, tha more u influence me so keep whachu gotta say comin |
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06-24-03, 12:32 AM | #2 | |||||||
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Cmon ppl... just tell me how much i gotta improve and elevate... im waitin for it...
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06-24-03, 12:45 AM | #3 | ||||
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it's was good to me , but what the hell do i know, keep it up
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06-24-03, 12:47 AM | #4 | |||||||
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thanx man ay keep ya practice up like i was all day and u'll be better than me lol
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06-24-03, 01:16 AM | #5 | |||||||
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I need sum critics over here. Still waitin for em.
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06-24-03, 01:21 AM | #6 | ||||||
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hey baby! i thought it was off the hook! i loved it man! keep it up fa sho!
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06-24-03, 01:24 AM | #7 | |||||||
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Thanx sexy... we gonna hook up lata and I'll spit sum more game... :-D... but till then more critics
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06-24-03, 01:48 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Still waitin for more critics
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06-24-03, 02:39 AM | #9 | ||||||
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yo my refered man.. haha, it was tight fo newbie to this shit... ya still could elevate some
try usin some tight vocab n shit... try relatin to shit |
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06-24-03, 02:43 AM | #10 | |||||||
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^Word. |
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06-24-03, 02:43 AM | #11 | |||||||
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thanx, my nigga. U always dere for me and shit helpin me out. Thanx for dat 2. Still waitin for more. Waitin for Bash and Skiddz to say sum shit
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06-24-03, 02:48 AM | #12 | ||||||
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lmao......that was seriously wack.......boy where ur skillz at........did that even have any topic to it..........flow was off.......vocab was weak...........concept was wack.......it was just basically u sayin "dont fuck with me cuse i am gangsta"........u need major elevation
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06-24-03, 02:51 AM | #13 | ||||||
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06-24-03, 02:53 AM | #14 | |||||||
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Cmon quit hatin nigga. lol its cool though. Still lookin for critics
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06-24-03, 03:19 AM | #15 | |||||||
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