lets go

you spit first

the rules were as follws............both check in immediately.......
BLIND SPIT.............verse due in 10 minutes................so once you check in..............we can begin.................


check check check

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check in
lets get it poppin
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After this shit ya gonna call me Rb's Santa Clause
I Rap this battle like a gift and simply hand you loss
Your skill is shown clearly when i fraction tha cost
Less than nothin, like ur punches, actions so soft
Sayin you can't lose?, from inside'a my mouth?
Give you this verball abuse, and spit the trash out
You might as well fall off, truthfully i'll sever you dawg
you wouldn't notice the difference, you were never on
2 an 0 and you think you the best, i put a chink in ya chest
The W relinquished by tech, get outta Rb, you simply a pest

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I'll Use Your Flaws as Fun-Facts, Then Start Attractin' The Votes/
Pimp-Slap U As I Tell your Immigrant Family to Get Back in the Boat/

Why You Tryin' To Start Shit.. When You Know It's Hard to Offend-Me Right /
I Would Choke You But U Still Got GodFather's Dick in your Wind-
Pipe/

Thinkin' that You Sick.. Bitch, You're Just a Lame-Infection/
& If the Wacks Start A Movement, U Better Walk the Same Direction/

You Idiot, You Faggot.. Take a Swing and Try To Slug-My Cite/
My Punches Feel Like Cannons, Your Punches Feel Like Bug-Bites/

FUckin' DUmmy.. I Don't Got Time To Spit.. I'll Just Change Clips, Fag!/
You've NEver Rode On SHiT, Shorty!.. Like Midgets At Six-Flags!/

now let the votes begin
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vote down

opener T
flow T
personals T
injoyment/creativity tie
closer T

yo I cant lose try not use fag alote man it was too much

overall vote TEC

return the favoure

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100636

peace

will do in a minute tribal...............uppn this.............................................. ......

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props ta both on this but a lil 1 sided
opener-tech
closer-tech
flow-tech
structure-tech
multis-lose
punches-tech

vote-tech
repay tha vote yall aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100239

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OPener: Tech
Closer: Tech
Personals: Tech had better
Punches: Tech
Flow: tie
Win: Tech
I_can't fix ya structure man. Honest voyes here please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100988

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opener-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
structure-tech
multis-lose
closer-tech
overall - tech



Lose change up ya struct

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blah blah blah...that enough now

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