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Old 12-29-03, 06:00 PM   #1
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This world is a prison and all its people are screws/
Trapped in a cell we can't taste, shit still hittin the news/
Bars out of reach, not only vicars who preach/
Gods footmen turning to hell, moved by the power of speech/
The Earth is a shithole, devils lair can't be much worse/
At least you can't feel pain, when you leave here in a death hurst/
Evil afore us, and yet more hurt left behind/
Money destroying the future, God had planned for mankind/
Truth seems harder to find, as we travel this road/
Absorbing the hatred, half dead nigga's explode/
Or maybe implode through lack of food and necessities/
I flip through T.V channels, and all i see is atrocities/
Monstrocities, caused by drugs lead to abnormalities/
Nobody seems to notice as their lives are ruled by currencies/
And felonies, just look at the Penitentiarys/
You'll find i speak no lies when your exposed to the extremities/
Mothers stole from their children, serving time for their men/
The laws geared towards bastards, time to pick up the pen/
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Old 12-29-03, 06:07 PM   #2
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BASIC...BUT GOT THE RHYME ACROSS NICELY....COULD HAVE ADDED SOME MORE COMPLEXITY..BUT THE WAY IT WAS NOT BAD...PZ....
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Old 12-29-03, 06:22 PM   #3
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shit was cool
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Old 12-30-03, 12:20 AM   #4
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Why you never come back to our battle bitch?
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Old 12-30-03, 12:23 AM   #5
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dis was an iight piece
nuffin special LOL
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Old 12-30-03, 03:03 PM   #6
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that shit was wack, that can't be some shit you wrote. Who you took that from krs? Get your raps together and battle me. one
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Old 12-30-03, 03:09 PM   #7
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66ok..i don't mind being wack..thats your opinion.. *cries in corner*

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Old 12-30-03, 03:14 PM   #8
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nah thats a fact you come in here "spittin" somebody else's shit. it's not right.
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Old 12-30-03, 03:14 PM   #9
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read my shit on this forum it's called keystyle.
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Old 12-30-03, 03:14 PM   #10
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wtf? thats my drop? who you think wrote that for me? i can assure you..it came from my mind..i aint no biter dawg!
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Old 12-30-03, 03:17 PM   #11
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aight east shorty. T.I.M. niggas don't play when it comes to battlin
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Old 12-30-03, 03:22 PM   #12
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IIight...Honestly nothing Special ... Good Flow I Guess

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Old 12-30-03, 03:26 PM   #13
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shorty criticize me all you want.reply to my shit. I like the help.N to anyone else it's called keystyle
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Old 12-30-03, 03:36 PM   #14
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take my poll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 12-30-03, 03:45 PM   #15
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wtf? thats my drop? who you think wrote that for me? i can assure you..it came from my mind..i aint no biter dawg!


Ur drop was good...... I think ya did a great job on it..... Keep dropping them.......
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