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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
LøCkz | 2 | 40.00% | |
Doze | 3 | 60.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-01-04, 08:33 PM | #1 | |
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Doze Vs. Lockz
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10 lines min and max..
Blind spit.30 mins after me.. No D/R votes No hate votes All votes explained.. 3-0 Ko or 1st to 5 Peace |
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01-01-04, 08:46 PM | #2 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Its Like..
Manz you aint changing at all, having wack products cause your an amateur, Your Making more Look alike wack bars than cheap wal-mart superstores/ Idolise these words boy as this type is heavy unlike your thin lined creations, You think your heard? Nah, people just stay by you cause your identification/ This crowd wants more, not your lame wackness typing out at standards of poor, Did you know, your just a bore, why? Cause your kiddie spits make us snore/ Lockz you just dock some low crap which don’t drop any devastating hits, You think you can lock this show? Hah your rusty spits dont secure winning scripts/ Fuck this fool, bitch your just a tool being used when thinking that your cool, Man, a kindergartens rhymes are more complex the shit you will bring in our duel/ Yeh yeh..come.. Peace... |
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01-01-04, 09:04 PM | #3 | |
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Here
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U aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/ Im Elusively Exclusive LocKz flares tha beat & Makes all Oppostion scared ta speak/ Lyrically You Proved-ya-weak Yea I said this was for a good-battle but I USED-you 4 a simple Defeat/ ur Lyrics Have Me Intrigue With Laughter, The Weather Bureau Should Label Your Verse A Natural Disaster/ This battle has Lockz on Top It’s another Happily-Ever-AFTER get on your knees and pray to your Master/ Dozing off this BASTARD so many punches comin from both fist you don’t who which one is hittin u FASTER/ Beating me aint happening like Beating A Limp Dick~This dudes a FuckiN PrICk~I advance to 1-0 QuICk/ You Got punches in your verse but they don’t Stick~ Trying to decide if me wants to be masculint or femine but he wont PICK/ Giving this nigga the Salute will be my next feat* Goodbye dawg ill always remember this az my most effortless of beats/ i kinda got confused..i thought the deadline was midnight tonight..i jus peeped this...Verse is choppy |
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01-01-04, 09:08 PM | #4 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin this peeps..if you look dont just go, drop a link ill return the favour!
Peace #1 |
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01-01-04, 09:18 PM | #5 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
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Dont fall asleep!! vote on this and ill return the favour! Peace |
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01-01-04, 10:34 PM | #6 | ||
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01-01-04, 10:57 PM | #7 | |
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Vote-Doze
Reason-Better punches.....flow...structure....Lockz...your structure was fucked up...Your lines were to long which killed your flow...and your punches were so damn basic....Doze merked you on every category.... |
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01-01-04, 11:11 PM | #8 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
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Dont fall asleep!! vote on this and ill return the favour! Peace #3 |
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01-01-04, 11:25 PM | #9 | ||
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IP: 91F8 37EE
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agree toataly dozey took it for me same reasons... |
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01-01-04, 11:38 PM | #10 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin on this < ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Dont fall asleep!! vote on this and ill return the favour! Peace... #4 |
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01-01-04, 11:52 PM | #11 | |
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Locks, you have to change up your style a bit.... I don't konw if you're used to battling verbally but it just doesn't look right when its text.
Then again, " [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)" doesn't make sense regardless of how you present it. If I could vote I'd go w/ Doze on ths one. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069 |
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01-01-04, 11:53 PM | #12 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Last one...
Uppin on this < :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Dont fall asleep!! vote on this and ill return the favour! Please people.. Peace #5 |
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05-02-04, 05:24 AM | #13 |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Doze got this in all categories , eeeeeeeeeeeenuff said.
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05-02-04, 06:50 AM | #14 |
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aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/ nice opener, structure was kinda off but the rest was hot yo vote locks |
05-02-04, 12:43 PM | #15 | |
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i think that doze got this one, my nigga you kept plain and simple. but dis nigga locks shit was a little too long which fucked up his structure. doze got that one.
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