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Fuck RhymeTyme, I done said this shit as a joke… got balls to bite
With your sorta skillz…. Can’t hold ya dick never mind a mic!
Ya try’na fight…. But like the blind who’s try’na write
Ya wanna start reading brail… cos like them ya aint in the light!
Ya in the shadows like a ghost… in fact have ya got one?
Whys that, ya ask?… cos if ya have send him back, where he’s got from!
Cos this 16 year old child from Kentucky... hes barely old enough to work
at 60ish posts should take it easy… ignore that, ya couldn’t get any worse!
I would rehearse ya dialect… try an add something worth while
Cos at the minute the ‘Tyme’ to ‘rhyme’ for you… is like the Mona-Lisa try’na smile!

yo, yo

Dev, if that is really yo name,
I'm going to put your alias to lethal lyricist shame,
your rhymes, are wack, when you pull the back attack,
you get smacked, on crack, and then, you get jacked,
trying to pull a another one, when I'm not lookin,
after i post my rhyme we'll see what this motherfucker was cookin',
if he isnt slow, the rhyme may get you shooken,
cause i know you cant write, all those rhymes have been tooken,
dev, you're blind to my ability, you got no agility,
with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed,
but anyways, you need to go back to the burbs,
you need to be battlin all the noobies and herbs

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Holy fuck....no question about it....haha!

Punches- Deva
Flow- Deva
Creativity- Deva
Multis- Deva
Opener- Deva
Closer- Deva
Enjoyment- Deva

Overall- Deva

Simply...RhymeTyme didn' stand a chance....watsoever....

Hit these up with an honest vote plz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105299

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105319

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Yo hit this battle up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105144

Honestly, I thought that Dev's shit was weak... But it was still enough to take the gold here...

Punches:
Rhyme: Getting better but still too much filer and they are hitting too lightly
Dev: Some aight shit, nothing really that caught my attention, but good enough to win

Flowev: Wow man that was whack flow, you r lines are strectched out and shit
Rhyme: Good flow kept it steady easy to read you won in this part of the battle

Personals:Rhyme: Nothin that really hurt him...
Dev: Good finishing personal

Metas:HAHAHAHA

Creativity: Rhyme: Most of your lines were played out and nothing cought my attention
Dev: Nice line about him not being able to hold his dick, very creative lol

Thats pretty much it so.....

VOTE: DEV

Punches- Deva
Flow- Deva
Creativity- Deva
Multis- Deva
Opener- Deva
Closer- Deva
Enjoyment- Deva
Punches-Deva
Flow-Deva
Wurd Play-Deva
Overall-
Deva7.3 RhymeTyme-6.0

Deva won this because of intelligence and Wurd Play,
Rhyme Tyme, Ive herad it all you need new material cause all your rhymes werent wack back in the day,now they're old and played out, ya heard.
~1~
ELEVATE
peace out

VOTE=DEVA

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i wasnt really feelin either both verses were choppy and ryhme tyme was to basic had a lot of filler lines i give it to dev .................................................. .................................................. .............

but ya cant poll so why???...............
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yo heres the breakdown........

Flow:dev...Sorta better than the other guys..his stays off beat if u rap wit it on a beat.
Structureev...Simple...thats all im saying
Punches:dev...Some witty punches thats all i can say...
Personals:dev......Some personals were very good...not a lot of them to find...Mostly punches is what i found.
multis:definitly DEV....had a lot of them
overall:dev.....Theres the breakdown...No hate ok..Honest opinion..

i took time on ur battle now plz return the favor by hitting up my battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105323

Deva takes this in every aspect. Both need elevation. I expected more form Dev. But oh well. Flow was even. There was little wordplay but Dev wins that category. Dev also had harder punches so therefore winner: Dev

Vote on my battle with Brethren, please.

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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