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Reflections lie in the crying eyes of the beholders complexion
Directions lead to surgery like beauty was unnatural selection People venting to rent away there exterior fearing for millions Electing the hysteria…exposing same deliria to there children Infants suckle through plastics until drastic measures explode Emotion stretched like elastic…to alter natural genetic nodes Identity reconstructed because image is reproduced in the eye Lives image is conducted reluctant to your origin from the sky Exposure to the blade leaves you contemplating people’s rage Lasers scribe my page now all mirrors shattered when engaged ..it aint over |
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01-18-04, 12:16 AM | #2 | ||||||
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damn...not even a look...
this deserves some peeps, cause it was actually pretty dope.... needs work on flow...but man...i see dopeness... i see how its all dimensions of skill...dope..i hope its not over..keep em comming.... ya got a lot ahead man.. props.
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01-18-04, 08:18 AM | #3 | ||||||
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thanks
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01-18-04, 09:32 AM | #4 | ||||
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Short but some good vocab usage here, ..flow was on point, & the topic was kinda interesting to me, .. tho i think u shud shorten ur lines, .. = ) ,.. but ur doing a good job writin topical.. keep em coming hombre..Upper..
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01-18-04, 09:35 AM | #5 | ||||||
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thanks homizzle
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01-18-04, 07:10 PM | #6 | ||||||
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up..
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01-18-04, 08:56 PM | #7 | |||
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Nice topic, kept on point, good vocab, flow was alright.. wasn't to complex.. but it was pretty good.. keep spitting and you might be able to collab with me one day
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01-19-04, 06:20 AM | #8 | ||||||
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lol thanks
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01-19-04, 07:00 AM | #9 | ||||||
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Dope vocab here, was the first thing that stood out to me...however the bars were a little on the long side, but you had internals which made up for it with some sick flow...also your rhyming words were comlex not just 3/4 letter type shit ya know...
Dope topic, nice title too, kept me interested throught...your a dope topical writer with alot of potential dawg, keep spittin it'.... 3/5 |
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01-19-04, 08:49 AM | #10 | ||||||
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thanks
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01-19-04, 10:38 AM | #11 | |||||||
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Wow your prettygood yourself I didn't think people would actuely like my shit ...
Love sexigurlcanflow |
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01-19-04, 01:48 PM | #12 | ||||||
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01-19-04, 01:51 PM | #13 | ||||
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..Good content..good flow..loving the short length..this was great~~~~~~~
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01-19-04, 02:20 PM | #14 | |||||||
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Short And Sweet... Very Nice It Flow'd well and i can actually tell you spent time on this.. 8/10 Ps: Where's The Rest?
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01-19-04, 02:34 PM | #15 | ||||||
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i really liked this piece, gives you a lot of imagery, makes my gears turn inside my mind....sphere you did a really good job on this nice vocab...you said it ain't over so i can't wait to check out the next verse...we should collab sometime
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