10-12 lines
i spit first i guess...
you got 30 minutes..
feed off me and die...
no/crew/hate/dr/word...
checkin and i'll key

check bitch............................................. ...............................

I see you already know the outcome so you spelled reaL with a double L..
you want me to remeber the name so i can see it turn to ReaLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
keyin for this kid cause he couldn't drop bombs with the absence of hands..
spelled bombz like my mans so your crew is just part of what i by nature am...
you no what else creates the clouds in your sig kids getting smoked like herb...
we all know you make verses out of refriderator poetry least thats what i heard..
the warm cat fuzzily ran out of the moon..makes bout as much sense as your crew..
or for that matter me battling you ..look at what the fuck boredem makes some do..
this kid couldn't get his game straight if i gave him a level look i'm trying to help you..
see this J wood make a dockery of you but you done that for me already..
oh shit thats every kid in your crew fuck your aftershock my pen still scripts steadily..
drops heavily on kids comin readily but not takin the time to learn about longevity..

your turn clock starts now...... and you better not feed or pussy out one...

a yo fuck this clown he aint better than me/
watch out cause the 9 will put mo things in ur stomach than pregnacy/
its reall bitch so you know imma merk you/
so when you see the red dot dont thik its a platex commercial/
listen fam ya flo, i hate it/
dont get made this the realL reason u underated/
this bitch is mad and i know he a hater/
he couldn't get on my level i he took an elevator/
what wrong?.. gettin beat by a newb?/
u fuccin bitch you feminin thats y ur style is moody/
you weak as hell jus stay behind/
if you dont then youll get smoked like my signature sign.

ITS NOTHIN

uppi 4 votes............................................. .....................................

up the votes............................................. .................................................. .

this was nice........... not
vote underated
breakdown
vocab un
punches un
metas un
personals tie
flow un
outcome underated. u need to elevate u really do. another words you got clowned (reall).

vote this shit.............................................. ...............................

vote underated easily

vocab- tur, you came way to basic reall
punches- tur, you had nice shit, reall, punches win battles
strucuture- reall, both of you need to work on that
wordplay- tur, he had nice wordplay, reall had nothing once again
personals- Tur, i was feeling his more
flow- Tur, but both flows were scrappy

battle was not good, underated took this with punches, personals, and wordplay

hit htis up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...375#post1105375

vote.............................................. ...........................................

aight lets up thisfor the first time and hopefully this won' talk long......

Weak battle in my eyes...One sided

punches...Under by along shot<-- hit harder
Flow.. Real<-- only category he took
Wordplay...Under.. fucking nice man keep it up

so

V/ Underrated

return tha honest vote man... thanks

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meh...it was an ok battle. ReaLL. advice man, check out the LLL battles, they are really good and will help you up your game, espically with punches and structure. Under had more meaningful and better punches, his were better. UnderRated takes this in every category in my eyes, except for flow because when reading your bars, they sound kind of stretched.

Vote- TheUnderRated.

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Currently Open Battles:
T West vs. Kizza

Semi Coo battle But Very One sided
punches...Under by along shot...Siccer an hit harder
Flow.. Real<-- only category he took
Wordplay...Under.. fucking nice man keep it up

so

V/ Underrated

return tha honest vote man... thanks


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