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Im like kerosean Im`a lean mean rappin machine
I got words in this head no nigga ever seen
u call me krispy kreme saltine. U battle me in
your dreams. Im` invincable. Let me show ya a priciple
U grab the mic. And u start fuckin chokin
n thease niggaz no it ain't from smokin
Ur a broken Record. repeatin ur self just for ur health
just go turn tricks with all ur country pricks
bring em round here n ill beat em with sticks
y u lookin at ur sisters pusssy picks. U DICK
Im ready like a rock hard hitter ain't runnin my block
he's too busy with cock
with this hand i hold my glock
i say this im ready to rock
rock n roll i gotta hold of u
bitch ima murder u
click click boom body layin in a jeep
carcus in a whole 6 feet deep

yo...check the time oveisly this whoel rhyme is bittin it was posted in only 8 minutes!
so im gunna merk this littel rhyme biteing whore i read 2 of his lines and didnt have to reed any more!/
its plain sad how im gunna make this littel newbie my own littel whore/
THats wut i cant stand about new rappers byting other peeps shit!
u deserve to get slaped or hit by the hardhitter him self bitch/
your name shouldnt be bakerkid89!u aint no real rapp fighter!/
so from now on im gunna call u lyrical rhyme biter/
I dont know why i was 3 credits to battle this kid,or waste my time fuck it theres my 10 lines...................

ightt uppin for votes.......i will return the favor...........*1*

ima give this here to hardhitter, cause he had nice strucrure,
and he had attitude, his flow went good together.

baker, you verse was alright, you could of done better,
you need to work on you punches, they arent strong enough.

since i took my tim to say what i think, vote on the underRated vs yungthug619

are you gonna vote on my shit or what, i said what i think on here!!

hardhitter = you had good flow ,punches, structure, but the vocab woz a bit off.

baker = flow was ok, but you need to elevate, i didnt see a single thing i liked in that spit. and you deserve to lose on the first line alone.

vote = hard hitter

please do the same and vote on this battle. thanks.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108879

lets get these votes in............*1*................

ightt yo uppin for them vote..........................#3..........*1*

yo uppin these votes......come on i will return the favor...thanx......*1*

yo hard hitter took this
his flow was nice
structure=hard
baker man you need to work on your structure dont
punchlines i didnt really see any good ones from any of you but hard had more of a hit

this vote gos to hard

no hate good battle here
return the favor plz
link on my sig

bakerkid? wow.. your horrible
die.. please
well that was the worst thing i ever seen
Hardhitter, had the right concepts in mind
just need to word them better

v/ Hardhitter

uppin for them votes for the last time come on yall get um in and i will return the favor...........thanx...........*1*

Hardhitter gets my vote cuz he was beefin it up real nice and shyt...baker u could've had dis one but u need to work on ur vocab.......
vote=hardhitter