10 linez min
no hate votez
no crew votez
basic rulez
good luck
pz.

no dr votes
hurry up and spit im signing off for 30 mins coz looks like ur gonna take long to post

aight
your nickname my habbit, 'original name', gotta hand it
call me the bomb squad cuz u about to get *dismantled*/
your name servez u right cuz on a journey gettin' murdered
they dun lock me up for *187's* but just merkin' kidz/
u a 'looney tune' figure replicate like ya name's *bugz bummy* bitch
u a 'phooney to' so ACT FUNNY before my gunz start dumpin' shit/
u that big of a bitch u can open up *clit-shopz*
u that big of a snitch u can't spell "hip-hop"/
nuttin' at all, I'll snap u apart like a toothpick
u suck ALL dickz, I'm only down for my benjaminz/
fuck it, battle'z over, thiz cat got *murdered*
must b hard to die in a way u never heard of.../

good luck...
dun nobody sleep on this, leave linkz and I'll hit y'all back with honest votez... PZ.

man your last post was like an hour ago... doez it take THAT long to come up with some rhymez ? dun b pre-writin' shit

sorry bout taking so long i couldnt access the site it kept saying it was too busy.
anyway heres my verse
peep it;

how dare u challenge me, u dumb ass cumb sucker
with rymes bout as tight as ur bum, when dad fucks ya
dont be mad i know my lines are much tougher
only way ur getting votes is from ur brother
id still be above, if ya were 7 feet tall
like unleavened bread u cant rise, with metas so small
betta call in to da w.e.c
i know d liver e tried his best but it was weak
ive drained this punk so much hes logged off and gone to sleep
he must'v been robbed of logic with punchlines that oblique
this munchkin should get slapped everytime he tries to speak

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uppin' don't sleep on this shit................................... leave a link with your battle and I'll vote on it 2...........

Yo, here's what I think...

code.. first off took this battle.. he had better flow, better punches, more creative and wordplay then D. no hate. just my opinion. D's first couple lines didn't work together much at all. the rest was alright. just overall got beat. elevate it^

vote- code

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uppin 1
.................... drop battle links and ill check dem

d.liver.e takes this one easily,



dosent compare to this

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sorry, i pressed enter

he takes it with harder, punches an a more complex verse!!!

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hm.... D. Liver your rhymes were off in 2 parts I saw.. Lack of punches. Not very good. Code, yours flowed better and had better punches. Coulda ended it harder. But you took it

Vote - Code 187

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uppin 2

v/187

It was a close battle in my oppinion...
I gave it to 187 cause some of Ds punches wer a lil corny...
Close shit thought...

Please return the favor...
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-W1

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