Checkin in... Good luck...

umm i didnt completely agree, but i will set rules if you dont like it dont battle!

10-15 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate votes!
no feedin!
must check in, verses due by 9 Pm tonite!

Also Blind Spit! Meanin We Both Drop At The Same Time Or Whoever Drops First Drops First, No One Is Scheduled To Drop First, Make Sure You Make The Deadline!! Plees!

fuck it ill drop first, make sure yours is in by 3 pm tomorrow!

shit this fag dont need to curse in his verse/
cus it will only make his shit sound worse/
he dont rap, he should stick to star search/
you dont need to tell me, i kno my bars hurt/

i cut this emcee up like a knife through butter/
you scared to speak up, so you rap in mutters/
leave ya scared, so when ya talk u studder/
your not hot, imma give this newb the shutters/

and this cat must be a typo, wit a name like that/
he sed no d/r votes,he aint winnin then,thats a fact/
cat will say he dedicates his life to rap, but your crap/

and typo is upset, cus he tries so hard but he still gets cracked/
when will he face facts, and collapse, cus his flow is nothin but wack/

Yo, Iceman, I kinda feel bad for you my retarded friend//
Cause I'ma merk ya, have ya crazily screamin "this is the end"//
I'm da final apocalypse, eruptin' ur ass like a volcano//
It's hot in hurr, but for Typo, droppin ya is no problemo//
Your ass is mine, son, I'm gonna bomb your verse//
I'ma topple ya like WTC, don't even need to curse//
For better or worse, but in this case the answer's clear//
Talkin' mad s**t, but behind the mouth I sense the fear//
I'm like the Muhammad Ali to your Mike Tyson, no contest//
Rope de dope to ur ear bite, easy to tell who's da best//
From this fight there is no rest, you gotta keep comin' for more//
I'll probably get tired first, always poundin' your face in the floor//
This retard gets off by kissin' his own ass on a regular basis//
One man fan club, he's all alone feels like he's stranded on a oasis//
Dynasty Soldiers losin' their touch recruitin' people who be crap spittin'//
Pass me that tissue please, on this asshole I think I'm done s**ttin//

It aint that bad, I only went over one line. May the best man win... Uppin #1
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aight one line is cool, uppin 1..........................

well, i guess this had been typo`s best verse in the whole day, but anyway, iceman beated you completely...
well, i liked very much your opening, but man, his punches got over you.
vote: iceman
pd: still waiting for that incriminatory battle link!

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TYPO
Yo, Iceman, I kinda feel bad for you my retarded friend//
Cause I'ma merk ya, have ya crazily screamin "this is the end"//
EHH...NOT A GOOD PUNHC WHAT SO EVER
I'm da final apocalypse, eruptin' ur ass like a volcano//
It's hot in hurr, but for Typo, droppin ya is no problemo//
OK.....not to shabby.....has potential
Your ass is mine, son, I'm gonna bomb your verse//
I'ma topple ya like WTC, don't even need to curse//
blah....was alright
For better or worse, but in this case the answer's clear//
Talkin' mad s**t, but behind the mouth I sense the fear//
bleepin out curses is gay, and the line b4 you sed u didnt need to curse?
I'm like the Muhammad Ali to your Mike Tyson, no contest//
Rope de dope to ur ear bite, easy to tell who's da best//
decent......still filler
From this fight there is no rest, you gotta keep comin' for more//
I'll probably get tired first, always poundin' your face in the floor//
ehh....poor attempt at a punch
This retard gets off by kissin' his own ass on a regular basis//
One man fan club, he's all alone feels like he's stranded on a oasis//
Dynasty Soldiers losin' their touch recruitin' people who be crap spittin'//
Pass me that tissue please, on this asshole I think I'm done s**ttin//
again dont bleep out curses and get some punclines....
overall not a good verse dissing and punch wise...ok vocab and rhyme....too much filler
10/20

IceMan
wins very easily.....i give him 17/20 for lines like this

" cut this emcee up like a knife through butter/
you scared to speak up, so you rap in mutters/
leave ya scared, so when ya talk u studder/
your not hot, imma give this newb the shutters/"

both of you need to elevate and work on structure and dope punches.....peacce....
maybe some multies whould help too

could you plees poll vote?^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin

Word, Icman got this one...
Typo came too basic with it...
V/Ice
Keep doin it fellas...

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Well, I hear ya'll, but I don't think that my verse was bad... Iceman, ur verse was good to, you had better punches, but I think I took it in creativity and wordplay. Flow was a tie. Think about this before u deny it, but maybe ur record kinda puts u in a better situation than a newbie like me? Possibly? We have very different styles, but I think this battle was very close. Anyway, let's get some more votes in here... Uppin #2

uppin i have 3 in battles votes but there is only 2 on the poll!? and everyone is eligible too vote so wats up!?