10 linez to 15 linez
5 votez winz
only pplz wit 100 and more can vote
no crew or dickridin votez
To vote explain y and vote in da battle poll

sspit already or r u scared

yo when this shit turns ugly at your funeral you'll family will send floral/(flowers)
my lyrics attack ur cerebral to your cerebellum and ruin your morals/2
this is mortal Kombat gentleman and the "Games have begun"/
this dude's carryin weight of like ounces i'm carrying 50 tons/4
how you gonna spit at the top of your peak?/
when i put more bullets in you than in 50's lef cheek/6
ok i'm in your crib about to kill everything even the mouse/
and i'm leavin Skull-Fragents throughout this KIDS house/8
i'm a fuckin G.I JOE and your about to get fragged/
leave you huggin the streets then next week you'll be toe-tagged/10
i got u in the middle inbetween and i forgot to mention/
i beat this mother fucker down into submission/12
i errode all tendencies and terminoligy eating x-rays away not seemingly interesting/
tear you to pieces like flat silly string, and pierce your abdominal area like a belly ring/14

Yo John u talkin to my shit now u cant back down cuz Im here/
Ur end is near, ur rhymez r weak like if u were in first gear, I smell fear/
Look at thiz kid john, writin rhymez datz corny while drinkin cum/
Uz a chum, u bum, Try to rap like big pun, beware my gun, thiz shit just begun/
By ur rhymez ur only seven, I killed u instead of killin a revren, Im neva goin to heaven/
U lil bitch Im da devilz son havok 666 Im killin thiz kid whoz neva gonna be eleven/
Thiz stupid kid, luvin a man cuz he got shot by cupid, hopin he can ever do it/
Now he’z doin sex wit hiz man in florida and they’re sayin itz getting quite humid/
Yo kid Im like a mothafucin prisoner my rhymez iz getting me “past dem fuckin barz”/
Ima knock him out and he’ll start to see starz, at da same time Ima run ova wit my car/
Thiz kidz a transvestite whoz fuckin gay men all ova da place while I speak/
Wen I rap itz unique, I got u beat, cuz ya rhymez iz to weak, y r u aimin 4 my cheek/
Thiz kidz stupid Ima take hiz gun and shoot him in hiz head, more dan 50 got shot/
Instead of bulletz they my rhymez, and ya body iz gonna stop, den drop/

Datz it Im done, thiz waz no fun, I won and Im numba one, son/
lol

datz it votez are ready uppin 4 votez remember u havto be 100 post and up

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I can't vote yet, but havok took this one. he had an all around better flow with much less choppiness and his opening line was a kickin multi. back off the gay shit tho, it is played.
hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

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DIRTYENDZONE

iight thnx i'll look at dem battlez for u

Come on I need pplz to vote in thiz shyt

upin 4 sum votez peoplez

vote already

I aint freepostin Im makin thiz battle go to da top of da list so pplz can VOTE!!!

close battle

john = flow was ok and structure was also, punches i felt didnt really hit hard, and your vocab woz alright.

havoc = flow was also ok and structure, punches were weak, and vocab was alright.

rubbish battle

flow = tie
vocab=tie
punches=havok < just
vocab=tie

vote=havok

ya both need to elevate!!!!

iight 1-0 I need 4 more votez to win john puck ass