haha

well these are the rules....

8-12 lines
you spit first
no hate
no dr

let's do this

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well.............................................. .................................................. ............

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uppin so maybe sometime soon you can post...

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well.............................................. fuckinno show...brutal...you talk trash and then you can't even make a drop what the fuck

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fuck this bitch i'm bout to throw down my shit and i didnt take long because i could'nt get 10 lines i took long cuz i got in trouble bitch

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
he knew i was gonna win with my first line i instantly killed him//
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you i this is Game Over bitch//

there im done i thought that was shitty oh well now its you turn to drop Jpoll

fuck this bitch i'm bout to throw down my shit and i didnt take long because i could'nt get 10 lines i took long cuz i got in trouble bitch

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
with my first line i instantly killed him//
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you this is Game Over bitch//

there im done i thought that was shitty oh well now its you turn to drop Jpoll

fuck this bitch i'm bout to throw down my shit and i didnt take long because i could'nt get 10 lines i took long cuz i got in trouble bitch

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
with my first line i instantly killed this bitch//
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you this is Game Over bitch//

there im done i thought that was shitty oh well now its you turn to drop Jpoll

fuck this bitch i'm bout to throw down my shit and i didnt take long because i could'nt get 10 lines i took long cuz i got in trouble bitch

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
with my first line i instantly killed this bitch//
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you this is Game Over bitch//

there im done i thought that was shitty oh well now its your turn to drop Jpoll

man i dont know what the fuck went wrong with this shit but the last one is the right one

HaHa are you serious...why do you even do this...haha...it's imbarassing...

okay i'll go soft on you and i'll still KO your ass...don't talk so much shit if you can't back any of it up...

First off Mr.UNit, vaporize is from states, liquid to gas,
That means it's hot not cold, ya drop out, i can tell chem, you didn't pass,

In a battle of lyrical wits, 101, the basics is rhyming,
You can't even do this, you need to read " how to battle" on the forums what i'm finding,

I said 10 lines not 14, I'm sorry if your mentally impaired,
You come as hard as you can, and you say your shit sucks, it's cause you scared,

Even when you copy and paste your shit 4 times, theres nothing left,
I'll throw you in the sea, tied to rock, and you still won't have depth,

So come back in a year, or as long as takes for you to start thinking,
Cause right now as an emcee, you're as authentic as hilary duff, lip sinking.


KO...haha i wrote this at a friends in five minutes...and i still killed you ,,,,your laughable...

BITCH

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yo, I give this battle to JPOLL, why you ask?.. because not anyone of gunits lines rymed... besides this one tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll// and what the fuck is that.. you dont make a huge line then a 4 word line.. lol, man you got some work to do check out the tutorials man, good spit JPOLL ez KO here man... vote JP


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This is some easy shit to vote on.
KO for Gunit101.
The boi got no rhyme scheme, or structure. Can't tell the difference between 10 an 14 lines and had very poor punches. believe me, I know, I'm the king of them. but now I think i'm gona have to hand u my throne. lol. U got lots of work to do man. lots. I suggest u go an read some tutorials.

JPoll, u had a good rhyme scheme. kept the shit flowin.
Fav line: I said 10 lines not 14, I'm sorry if your mentally impaired,
You come as hard as you can, and you say your shit sucks, it's cause you scared,
made me smile lol. Keep up the good work.

Vote: JPoll

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^^^ I agree. JPoll just said some jack and jill shit and still killed him. Check it out

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
No flow what so ever
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
So you are sayin he is currently the king.........lol
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
Where's the rhyme?
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Still no Rhyme.......
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
Holy Shit is it over yet.....
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
with my first line i instantly killed him//
Stretched ass line wit barely a rhyme......
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you this is Game Over bitch//
Very Very Very weak closer.....


First off Mr.UNit, vaporize is from states, liquid to gas,
That means it's hot not cold, ya drop out, i can tell chem, you didn't pass,
Good Personal....
In a battle of lyrical wits, 101, the basics is rhyming,
You can't even do this, you need to read " how to battle" on the forums what i'm finding,
Kinda weak but it rhymed....
I said 10 lines not 14, I'm sorry if your mentally impaired,
You come as hard as you can, and you say your shit sucks, it's cause you scared,
Weak, but still a punch....
Even when you copy and paste your shit 4 times, theres nothing left,
I'll throw you in the sea, tied to rock, and you still won't have depth,
Kinda played but still an OK punch.....
So come back in a year, or as long as takes for you to start thinking,
Cause right now as an emcee, you're as authentic as hilary duff, lip sinking.
Weak Closer........

This was an easy win for JPoll. He took all catagories without even tryin. GUNIT, y ou need to learn how to rhyme words. Then learn how to throw a punch. Just get the basics down and then we'll start workin on metas and multis and shit..........

vote - JPoll

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JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
hahah, u wrote that, no more talkin shit for u. but that vapor comment u ingnorate enough to spit against me dude.

yo, jpoll u had one wordplay line, but took 100% of that catagory. wit.
Even when you copy and paste your shit 4 times, theres nothing left,
I'll throw you in the sea, tied to rock, and you still won't have depth,

vote- jpoll

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JPoll I took the time to hit up this battle, and you wont even vote for mine... come on man .. hit it up

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