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make it 10-20 lines lol sorry but im all about finishin good....but this is my check in...its 5:30 right now IN ATL so u have 20 minutes 2 drop...i'll drop 10-15 mins after u..pce

yo if u wanna talk bout wht we were talkin bout add me to ur msn atlsrepo4life@hotmail.com we can talk more bout it...pce

Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt...
Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ...
You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress...
Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day...
Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet...
This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL)
makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user...
Killah bwoy murdered you then I went and killed the Killah...
Got quick so scared his blood turns cold like Im the Chillah...
Im the thriller you could be 2pac and wouldnt even be tight...
Im still being polite, Im just waitin for a spark so I can egnite...
Alright here it comes Im on fire...your done so say goodnight...
This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch...
Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch...

Sorry if it took to long some guy came to my door...

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good shit dawg lets see what dude brings i'll vote when ya'll done
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iight thx... lets see what ya got punch... iiight?....

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ight well he mite of won...did the best i could...so here it is

U’ll never make it to the top, so stop wasting time and posting
only way u’ll make it to the top is if u and the end started dating
it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot
if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought
ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected
I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected
Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading
Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing
Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico
God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow
this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount
i got u itching so much its like im sending lice through ur back
u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack
ur money's my slut and ur talent is ur money, whored ur wealth
I’m like a disease I spread easily and watch u beg pleasey as u loose ur stealth
you wouldn't be ill if i hurled your style, son im’a smoke u like black and mild
And on this site, starting with u im knocking all the tops off like girls gone wild

heres wht this punch line means-"this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount"

GORE IS AL GORE FROM THE PRESIDNCY THING...HE DIDNT WIN SO IT'S PRETTY EXPLANITORY..IF U DONT GET IT UR RETARDED...THATS ALL I GOTTA SAY....lol pce

iight, niice spit man... lets get these votes a flowin like the women in hawaii.. lol

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holy shit, lol. this one ain't THAT easy, but i knew who to choose quick.
best lines from G -

"Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt..."
(the first line of that shoulda been the punch, but it's still pretty good)
once again- the first line sounds like a punch
"This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL)
makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user..."

punch's best-
"it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot
if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought
ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected
I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected
Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading
Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing
Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico
God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow"

that shit was MAD ill, it surprised me when it cam outta no where - like, the beginning wasn't good, the end was ok, but the middle, i was all, "ohhhhh", just like in a verbal battle.

vote- quickpunch (good one bro)

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iight man, stait vote.. keep em comin peeps....

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Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt...
Good Punch....nice solid opener....wit a good personal....8/10
Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ...
You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress...
Ok punch....good set up line tho....7/10
Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day...
Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet...
not that great...jus a bar...4/10
This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL)
makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user...
good personal....punch was decent....8/10
Killah bwoy murdered you then I went and killed the Killah...
Got quick so scared his blood turns cold like Im the Chillah...
NICE....now thats a hot bar...10/10
Im the thriller you could be 2pac and wouldnt even be tight...
Im still being polite, Im just waitin for a spark so I can egnite...
Alright here it comes Im on fire...your done so say goodnight...
Pretty nice...good multis....not really any punch tho....8/10
This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch...
Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch...
HaHa....this had me laughin....tight closer....9/10

Okay...Verse Score....54/70....77%
You had a great flow throughout ur whole verse.....nice punches and than sum decent punches.....couple hot personals.....overall verse was pretty well rounded and a good sustainment....vocab was nice....wordplay was good....u had a bar wit multis....good verse....

U’ll never make it to the top, so stop wasting time and posting
only way u’ll make it to the top is if u and the end started dating
Good set up line....but the punch wasnt awesome....nice flow....8/10
it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot
if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought
NICE NICE NICE....love metaphors....good meta right there...10/10
ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected
I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected
Good wordplay and flow....good punch....9/10
Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading
Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing
Nice flow....ok punch....nothin too special....7/10
Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico
God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow
Hahaha...nice punch....10/10
this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount
Ok punch....good set up line....6/10
i got u itching so much its like im sending lice through ur back
u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack
Ok....could use werk....6/10
ur money's my slut and ur talent is ur money, whored ur wealth
I’m like a disease I spread easily and watch u beg pleasey as u loose ur stealth
Ok multis but didnt feel ur punch.....5/10
you wouldn't be ill if i hurled your style, son im’a smoke u like black and mild
And on this site, starting with u im knocking all the tops off like girls gone wild
Nice closer...nice mutlis....ok set up line but could use werk....good closer....8/10

Okay verse score....69/90....77%....
You had a good flow....nice hard hitting punches....sustainment wasnt there towards the end.....good verse overall.....u had nice metaphors....no personals....nice multis....nice spit....

TIE....77 overall to 77 overall....so the tie breaker will be by a breakdown...

Opener - G...better punch
Flow - tie...both had hot flow
Punches - G...he had more hard hitting punches
Personals - G...he had personals
Multi's - quick...better multi's
Structure - tie...both had nice structure
Wordplay - quick...he showed off better wordplay
Metaphors - quick...had nice meta's
Creativity - tie..both had nice creativity n expressed their minds
Sustainment - G...obvious
Closer - G...better punch
Enjoyment - tie...liked both

Tally's up as....
G - 9
quick - 7

nice battle but G came out in the tie breaker breakdown....heated battle....please return the favor!!!!......

Vote - G

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119613

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ight thanks for the honest votes....keep hittin this up...i for one say this was a very close battle...so keep comin with the votes..HONEST VOTES ONLY

close but i giv ma vote gkillaz.just,soz quickpunch u right it was close.both gud flows

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GKillaz had the flow/structure going there.Not that ur was bad, quickpunch , but GKillaz had it going perfect.

Gkillas-"This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch..."
"Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch..."
^these rhymes were mad good.Quick whore Punch rhming with Dick for lunch.U got some skillz there nigga.Not to mention your opener where you stated that stuf bout Erie&Bert,NICE SHYTH.
"Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ..."
"You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress... "
^^^But this line right here is whack.U gotta break away from this kinda stuff and use rhymes like u did in the opener and closer.But nevataless,Nice rap Gkillaz

QuickPunch-Ur opener&closer was lacking when compared to GKillaz.But some lines that I like were-
"ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected"
"God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow"
"u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack"
"Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing"
^^^^It's lines like these that will get u places.

vote-QuickPunch-U won on the skin of ur teeth,but next time ,make sure u keep lines like the same lenght and work on opener&closer.Opener&Closer might not be as important as flownpunches,but it can affect the outcome of a battle.