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Reposting Fine's verse because he didn't spell my name correctly...

FINE'S VERSE

yo N shite i'll put up a fight, clean you in 1 punch in a mighty swipe/
ive got the skill i got more talent it's ment to hurt you and turn mind loose once it's spun around/
this bitch is steppin up to the most untested, put a curse spell on ya that's just been casted/
I'll make you have flash backs, start seeing gohst 's in hullusination/
im trying to speak the words, that hit u in chest no stopping bullet proof vests penostrating/
once your dead im not gonna stop you from reviving, i'll make this into a nasty deverstation/
this guy is neally dead already, god don't like him to much anyway, so he's gonna die quickly/
if he did i could live peacefully, instead of being fed up in misery/
this guys been tawn severed and tampered, like a virus polluting you/
fuck this shit, ive done enough, i'll let my flow finish you off/

yo N shite i'll put up a fight, clean you in 1 punch in a mighty swipe/
ive got the skill i got more talent it's ment to hurt you and turn mind loose once it's spun around/
this bitch is steppin up to the most untested, put a curse spell on ya that's just been casted/
I'll make you have flash backs, start seeing gohst 's in hullusination/
im trying to speak the words, that hit u in chest no stopping bullet proof vests penostrating/
once your dead im not gonna stop you from reviving, i'll make this into a nasty deverstation/
this guy is neally dead already, god don't like him to much anyway, so he's gonna die quickly/
if he did i could live peacefully, instead of being fed up in misery/
this guys been tawn severed and tampered, like a virus polluting you/
fuck this shit, ive done enough, i'll let my flow finish you off/

N-Sight's Verse


First off,

I got no patience wit wack herbs tryna make a name..-
Recordin the show be 'bout the only way you gettin' fame..-
Im stayin' calm like ZEN masters when I'm facin' ur thin lines..-
Time's up for droppin' shit, learn how to END RHYME..-
You're cat fightin' dawg, your swings don't disturb me..-
Once in a while try typin' usin the return key..-
You're vexed with bars, I'm reppin tecs for Lexicon..-
It must be a bitch to know that your best gets stomped..-
So mothafuck this strictly wack illiterate bitch..-
If I Fax my rap to you..still couldn't rip my shit..-
You like abuse from better emcees, I can really tell that..-
Might not be the brightest kid, but I know you got spell check..-

Fuck outta here!

ha! battle was madd weak no creative lines from nun of u niggaz

opener-umm N...both of ya'll shit was wack tho lol
structure-a tie both of ya'll had some fuked up lines
punchlines-nun..frm both
wordplay-nun...from both
multi's-fine
personals-nun from both
enjoyed-nun of u niggaz lol but i gtta go wit N i mean atleast he tried da coem up with some shit both of ya'll need da learn how da really battle rap and get creative 4 real

my vote-N

return da favor da link is my sig...GON

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

fine mind
what was with ure lines.
no disrespect but they were wack.
u flow was off in places and u seriously lacked on structure. ure punches were weak, the only line that had any force behind it was the opening line. after that it was all bleh!! ure lines hardly rhymed and u had no creativity in there, it was all just basic.
u need to get creative, beef up ure punchlines, use more personals, throw in a couple of multis u know. check ure opponents previous battles and profile for ammo to use.

n sight
wasnt ure best, rather basic i think.
ure flow was on i was feelin ure verse and shit. ure structure was on again, usin that basic square shit...always gud!! gotta say, punches came weak but they did have connection. u had little creativity if that, ure punches were all basic shit but still better than fines. i say the same to u......beef up ure punchlines, personals and punches are what win battles, show some creativity and use better wordplay, that'll get victories most of the time.

Overall weak battle, not top spits from either of you.
V/ - N Sight cuz he came harder than fine mind.

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I do know you fuck face, fucking king loser. You couldn't rap to save your life. I do know how to do multies check my other posts u good for nothing. Despite this being a bad round it still fucked N sight up and your just backing him up. N sight had shitty lines, he don't know how 2 constuct a metephor. haha

^^ and u don't know how to spell it

it's METAPHOR


dick head

ha!^^^^^yo dogg u not battlin rite now vote on my battle

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

mabe they should write the metaphor on your head, punk ass bitch tranni fucker jiggerlo.

yo N u said i came in ya post drinkin haterade???? dogg it dont matter who u battlin u dont suppose da take it easy and spit some weak shit nahmean make dem niggaz beg 4 mercy im da only honest nigga on rapbattles im not a hater

close battle..both were week...n sight..i kinda got the feelin ur a d/r but ah well....ur punches were played and didnt land...fine mind...not much beeter..but i fel dat ur punches made more sense...
v/fine mind

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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^^ d/r...stfu...don't come in here making claims without evidence bitch


uppin 4 more votes


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P.S. Fine Mind...you're about to get banned


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Fine mind:
yo N shite i'll put up a fight, clean you in 1 punch in a mighty swipe/
ive got the skill i got more talent it's ment to hurt you and turn mind loose once it's spun around/
-nice multies but too stretchy
The res of yo flow was ight and all.. structure was straight tight multies but weak (really weak) punches..
overall: 6.5/10

N-Sight:
I got no patience wit wack herbs tryna make a name..-
Recordin the show be 'bout the only way you gettin' fame..-
-nice start...

The rest of yo flow was good average structure and all.. u seemed to had harder punches so u get my vote
overall:7/10

vote=n-sight

thanx yo

uppin dis bad boyee for votes

holla atcha boyee

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