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Thinking he's the great white....he's just caught up in hype
He'll never be easier to kill.......he's always N-Sight
He only beats up on newbs....what a coward, he's fearing it
This pussy's already left bloody....he's a talented period
I got my cards on the table.....you staying or folding
Thinking he's the shit just cause his name is in colons
Ain't no one bumping your shit....they say his shit is sorry
Only time he'll see a Kenwood is playing with his Barbies
He's like overcooked steak.....thinking he's so damn tough
I'll leave him like twelve O'Clock....stuck with both hands up
Avi says outkast.....but he's leaving cast out
He could step on my fingers and I'd still win....hands down
Behind enemy lines.....shit, I'm leaving you fucked man
Cause I'm known to fire across like I was the Ku Klux Klan
Re$tricted's alright......but he's your only vet
So Fuck Metaphorical Techniques....They stay below C.S
This bitch couldn't bring heat if he was wearing oven mitts
Don't ever call me out...now you know who you're fuckin wit

Eh.....not really in the mood tonight

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Aiyo

Kid, you need to stop trippin' thinkin' you pop triggas..ur home is the suburbs..
But you 'sign-on' as 'ThugMurda'..ur not hot that's just sun-burn..
'On ur knees' u got rug-burn..so don't even THINK ur the illest..
Postin' DP's pic in your verse the only way niggas will 'feel it'..
Just call me "V"..for "V"an Helsing causing this 'biter' hell..*
See, I'm from D.C.. but you got popped by the 'Sniper' and fell..**
Most of your verses are wack..cuz ur infant style is 'infantile'..
Battlin' me..I'll have you winning every 4 years like 'Olympic style'..
I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'..
Bitch, ur rhymes are played as fuck..ur vocab and multis is missin..
Tried to 'cook up hot shit'..so you fixed this 'herb-dish' in ur kitchen..***
Slim's writtens is slim pickins..I was lurkin' to merk this bitch..
Even ya man's disrespect you..like, "E's aiight but he ain't shit"..
'Enygma', I'll jab with machetes..chop u into a thousand piece stack..
Ur too simple, I 'solved the puzzle'..a picture of the wackest kid in rap..

Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuur

Kid, I got a trophy case style..I'm leavin u with a broken face..
All the hot artists in ur SIG..u got raped like the Kobe case..

Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuur



*Van Helsing, the movie about vampires (biters, get it)
**Remember the DC area sniper..and yes, I live in Wash. DC
***Look @ his title



pz

Thinking he's the great white....he's just caught up in hype
He'll never be easier to kill.......he's always N-Sight
6...pretty crappy opener!!
He only beats up on newbs....what a coward, he's fearing it
This pussy's already left bloody....he's a talented period
8...nice line, gud personal!!
I got my cards on the table.....you staying or folding
Thinking he's the shit just cause his name is in colons
7...gud line again, similar to wat u used against me wit the colons!!
Ain't no one bumping your shit....they say his shit is sorry
Only time he'll see a Kenwood is playing with his Barbies
7...lmao!! funny shit man!!
He's like overcooked steak.....thinking he's so damn tough
I'll leave him like twelve O'Clock....stuck with both hands up
7...nice line, clever meta!!
Avi says outkast.....but he's leaving cast out
He could step on my fingers and I'd still win....hands down
6...ok that was pretty weak!!
Behind enemy lines.....shit, I'm leaving you fucked man
Cause I'm known to fire across like I was the Ku Klux Klan
9...that shit was hott, i liked the fire across part...that shit was funny!!
Re$tricted's alright......but he's your only vet
So Fuck Metaphorical Techniques....They stay below C.S
6...weak man, a nice attempt but it failed!!
This bitch couldn't bring heat if he was wearing oven mitts
Don't ever call me out...now you know who you're fuckin wit
7...aight closer, nuthin special that stood out!!


Kid, you need to stop trippin' thinkin' you pop triggas..ur home is the suburbs..
But you 'sign-on' as 'ThugMurda'..ur not hot that's just sun-burn..
7...pretty clever, but drop the ' ' and work on structure!!
'On ur knees' u got rug-burn..so don't even THINK ur the illest..
Postin' DP's pic in your verse the only way niggas will 'feel it'..
6...i wasn't feelin that punch, pretty basic and weak!!
Just call me "V"..for "V"an Helsing causing this 'biter' hell..*
See, I'm from D.C.. but you got popped by the 'Sniper' and fell..**
8...funny shit, gave me some laughs!!
Most of your verses are wack..cuz ur infant style is 'infantile'..
Battlin' me..I'll have you winning every 4 years like 'Olympic style'..
6...pretty basic vocabs and the 2nd line didn't work!!
I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'..
7...nice meta in the 1st line!!
Bitch, ur rhymes are played as fuck..ur vocab and multis is missin..
Tried to 'cook up hot shit'..so you fixed this 'herb-dish' in ur kitchen..***
7...again clever, and nice personal!!
Slim's writtens is slim pickins..I was lurkin' to merk this bitch..
Even ya man's disrespect you..like, "E's aiight but he ain't shit"..
6...pretty basic, nuthin too special!!
'Enygma', I'll jab with machetes..chop u into a thousand piece stack..
Ur too simple, I 'solved the puzzle'..a picture of the wackest kid in rap..
7...nice personal, but not as gud as i know u can do!!
Kid, I got a trophy case style..I'm leavin u with a broken face..
All the hot artists in ur SIG..u got raped like the Kobe case..
7...nice closer!!

POINTS TOTALS
enygma - 63/90
n-sight - 61/90

V/ - enygma

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breakdown:

enygma:

Thinking he's the great white....he's just caught up in hype
He'll never be easier to kill.......he's always N-Sight
^^str8 opener decent punch 6/10
He only beats up on newbs....what a coward, he's fearing it
This pussy's already left bloody....he's a talented period
^^bloody pussy...period lines are played 5/10
I got my cards on the table.....you staying or folding
Thinking he's the shit just cause his name is in colons
^^hott shyt 8/10
Ain't no one bumping your shit....they say his shit is sorry
Only time he'll see a Kenwood is playing with his Barbies
^^str8 bar decent punch 6/10
He's like overcooked steak.....thinking he's so damn tough
I'll leave him like twelve O'Clock....stuck with both hands up
^^good shyt nice meta 8/10
Avi says outkast.....but he's leaving cast out
He could step on my fingers and I'd still win....hands down
^^decent punch 7/10
Behind enemy lines.....shit, I'm leaving you fucked man
Cause I'm known to fire across like I was the Ku Klux Klan
^^ehhh ok bar 5/10
Re$tricted's alright......but he's your only vet
So Fuck Metaphorical Techniques....They stay below C.S
^^str8 personal seen the "below" a crews name thing already tho 7/10
This bitch couldn't bring heat if he was wearing oven mitts
Don't ever call me out...now you know who you're fuckin wit
^^decent closer good punch 6/10

overall : 58/90

n-sight:

Kid, you need to stop trippin' thinkin' you pop triggas..ur home is the suburbs..
But you 'sign-on' as 'ThugMurda'..ur not hot that's just sun-burn..
^^good opener decent wordplay nice punch 7/10
'On ur knees' u got rug-burn..so don't even THINK ur the illest..
Postin' DP's pic in your verse the only way niggas will 'feel it'..
^^lol this one had me rollin 8/10
Just call me "V"..for "V"an Helsing causing this 'biter' hell..*
See, I'm from D.C.. but you got popped by the 'Sniper' and fell..**
^^ehh ok bar not hott tho 4/10
Most of your verses are wack..cuz ur infant style is 'infantile'..
Battlin' me..I'll have you winning every 4 years like 'Olympic style'..
^^best bar in the battle crazy shyt nice 9/10
I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'..
^^first line is played second one decent 5/10
Bitch, ur rhymes are played as fuck..ur vocab and multis is missin..
Tried to 'cook up hot shit'..so you fixed this 'herb-dish' in ur kitchen..***
^^good personal decent punch 6/10
Slim's writtens is slim pickins..I was lurkin' to merk this bitch..
Even ya man's disrespect you..like, "E's aiight but he ain't shit"..
^^good personal...and wordplay/multies 7/10
'Enygma', I'll jab with machetes..chop u into a thousand piece stack..
Ur too simple, I 'solved the puzzle'..a picture of the wackest kid in rap..
^^decent bar good punch 6/10
Kid, I got a trophy case style..I'm leavin u with a broken face..
All the hot artists in ur SIG..u got raped like the Kobe case..
^^lmao hott closer felt this 8/10

overall : 60/90

vote:n-sight...

i think N had the 2 strongest punches in this battle and it came down to those pretty close battle but he had them 2 punches that made his verse just a lil bit hotter than your enygma but still good shyt from you enygma

~!1!~

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WHOA NICE SPIT FROM BOTH SIDES

Kid, you need to stop trippin' thinkin' you pop triggas..ur home is the suburbs..
But you 'sign-on' as 'ThugMurda'..ur not hot that's just sun-burn..
'On ur knees' u got rug-burn..so don't even THINK ur the illest..
Postin' DP's pic in your verse the only way niggas will 'feel it'..
Just call me "V"..for "V"an Helsing causing this 'biter' hell..*
See, I'm from D.C.. but you got popped by the 'Sniper' and fell..**
// NICE OPNER I LIKE DAT MAN U CREATING USING PERSONALS AND PUNCHES//


Most of your verses are wack..cuz ur infant style is 'infantile'..
Battlin' me..I'll have you winning every 4 years like 'Olympic style'..
I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'..
Bitch, ur rhymes are played as fuck..ur vocab and multis is missin..
Tried to 'cook up hot shit'..so you fixed this 'herb-dish' in ur kitchen..*** GOOD NICE BODY U WENT HARD WIT DA PUNCHES AND CAME HARD WIT DA PERSONALZ NOW SINCE U MASTA PERSONALS AND PUNCHES U NEED TO WORK ON MULTI'S DEN U BE UNTOUCHABLE
O AND WORK ON YO STRUTRE MAN MY EYEZ TOO SLEEPY (ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ)

Slim's writtens is slim pickins..I was lurkin' to merk this bitch..
Even ya man's disrespect you..like, "E's aiight but he ain't shit"..
'Enygma', I'll jab with machetes..chop u into a thousand piece stack..
Ur too simple, I 'solved the puzzle'..a picture of the wackest kid in rap..

Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuur

Kid, I got a trophy case style..I'm leavin u with a broken face..
All the hot artists in ur SIG..u got raped like the Kobe case..// NICE CLOSA LIKE I SAID LIKE WHEN U PUT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS TOGETHA

BUT DA KOBE DANG DAT WAS PLAYED//
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Thinking he's the great white....he's just caught up in hype
He'll never be easier to kill.......he's always N-Sight
He only beats up on newbs....what a coward, he's fearing it
This pussy's already left bloody....he's a talented period
I got my cards on the table.....you staying or folding
Thinking he's the shit just cause his name is in colons// DAMN NICE OPNER U USING PERSONALS WORD PLAY AND LIKE YO STRUTURE// AND PUNCHES U CAME HARD BETTA DAN N-SIGHT OPNER (AN EDGE)

Ain't no one bumping your shit....they say his shit is sorry
Only time he'll see a Kenwood is playing with his Barbies
He's like overcooked steak.....thinking he's so damn tough
I'll leave him like twelve O'Clock....stuck with both hands up
Avi says outkast.....but he's leaving cast out
He could step on my fingers and I'd still win....hands down
Behind enemy lines.....shit, I'm leaving you fucked man
Cause I'm known to fire across like I was the Ku Klux Klan
Re$tricted's alright......but he's your only vet// SEE DATS WHAT IAM TALKIN ABOUT KEEP ATTACKING YO OPPENENT PERSONALS AND PUNCHES// LIKED YO STRUTURE

Re$tricted's alright......but he's your only vet
So Fuck Metaphorical Techniques....They stay below C.S
This bitch couldn't bring heat if he was wearing oven mitts
Don't ever call me out...now you know who you're fuckin wit// NICE HOMIE U DISS HIM (PUNCHLINES) AND HIS CREW (PERSONAL)

OVERALL= I THINK DIS WIN GOES TO ENYGMA CUZ FLOW (EDGE) AND PUNCHS (EDGE) AND STRUTURE (KA BOOM)

ADVICE FOR N-SIGHT= YO N-SIGHT U GETTIN BETTA AND BETTA MAN// KEEP IT UP// AND IF I WAS DA LEDA OF M.T. I BE REAL PROUD CUZ U BEEN BATTLIN ALL DAY// AND GETTIN ACTIVE// YO N-SIGHT KEEP IT UP WORK ON MULTI'S//WORDPLAY// AND STRUTURE DEN U BE DA BOMB!

VOTE=ENGMA (BY AND EDGE)

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i'm already da bomb


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damn this was a close battle shit family im gnna bfreak it down like this

Enygma: Fire verse...i was feelin your flow the best thing i liked about your verse is the flow and structure...it was sick...i was feelin that shit fo real..good battle..your punches were sick but you had a cuple played lines like
I'll leave him like twelve O'Clock....stuck with both hands up
seen that about 4 times on this site..but uve also had sick lines

He only beats up on newbs....what a coward, he's fearing it
This pussy's already left bloody....he's a talented period

that was a hot line..one of da siccest lines in your battle ..your flow was the best thing about this verse thoug ..overall

44/50

N-sight you also had tight shit..i think he overpowered you with wordplay and vocab..but you had the punches,personals,word play you had some nice shit i was really feelin your wordplay in this one...you stayed consistant you didnt fall off half way through your shit...you said the right words.....nice shit..it was a hot verse i was feelin that time line to it was sick

overall 45.5/50

n-sight jus edged this one

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KiLlAh BwOy

Uppin............................

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Good battle..........Enygma......you came a lot weaker than I seen you drop in past battles, you had a lot of filler lines a few good personals but your weak lines far outnumbered your strong ones, you had good metaphors throughout but your punches were weak, so thats a plus an a negative at the same time, you had the clan line but that was just ok to me, the hands up meta was ah'ight its not biten but it is kinda of a played concept, vocab was decent, didn't really see any multies, you had good structure an your flow was ah'ight but overall pretty weak

N sight.....pretty good, you had him wit the wordplay an the punches, you had a good verse, van hel sing line that was tough, opener was ok borderline filler, your closer was strong, but that olympic style line shut his ass down son that was tight, you had good setups an meats an personals were on point, you had a really solid verse, not many multies, structure could have been better, flow was ok, but overall you had a really good verse, nive drop man

Vote: N Sight

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Whoa, this was dissapointing as fuck. Enygma, clearly you weren't in the mood. I thought there was no way N Sight could lose, cuz your verse was pretty weak. But lose he did. You see, rug burn is played, oh so very played. Infant style, infantile? That's not wordplay, that's just suck ass. Of course infant style is infantile, thats what infantile means. It would be like me saying "This kid got a newbie style, newbie" ... wow. Not good.

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Just call me "V"..for "V"an Helsing causing this 'biter' hell..*
See, I'm from D.C.. but you got popped by the 'Sniper' and fell..**"

Blah. Stop putting ' ' around your punches, thats herbish. Stop explaining them, thats herbish. Also, stop stretching your lines, although these were ok. Also work on setting up punches, for example these two having nothing to do with each other.

The olympic thing was ok, but again ruined for being stretched and worded poorly.

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I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'.."

No. If it was his watch on your wrist, this might make sense. Otherwise how is it "his time"? The wordplay fails. Also, the saying is crystal clear, and again the punch was not worded too well and was stretched a bit.

"Bitch, ur rhymes are played as fuck..ur vocab and multis is missin..
Tried to 'cook up hot shit'..so you fixed this 'herb-dish' in ur kitchen..***
Slim's writtens is slim pickins..I was lurkin' to merk this bitch..
Even ya man's disrespect you..like, "E's aiight but he ain't shit"..
'Enygma', I'll jab with machetes..chop u into a thousand piece stack..
Ur too simple, I 'solved the puzzle'..a picture of the wackest kid in rap.."

again, stop explaining punches. the herb-dish was kind of a nice concept, and was decent. And wtf is that "E's aight but aint the shit"? Who said that? If not, fake personal = gay, and the punch itself makes for a weak as fuck punch. I did like the way you took the played "enyga = puzzle/mystery" concept and included the picture part. This was your best punch of the battle I think, and especially because the setup actually had something to do with the punch. Do this more often.

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Kid, I got a trophy case style..I'm leavin u with a broken face..
All the hot artists in ur SIG..u got raped like the Kobe case.."

wtf?? this was terrible.

alright, so thats my little bit, try to improve where i said, you have some potential but you have to improve. work on set ups definetely, also a better set up means you will be able to develop the punch in the first line and not come stretched as fuck on some of those punches. Also, no more played shit like that second bar.

E - I won't comment, I know you're better than this, but your verse was mostly ass. Fortunatly for you, it was far more polished than N's ass. The only nice parts were the Kenwood/Barbie, the 12 oclock and the "below CS" thing. Closer the first line was ok, the second line wasted it.

Anyway like I said, E came more polished, less stretched, at least fresher concepts minus that pussy blood thing, and the cards which is getting a bit played. A little too much filler, but still enough to win. Solid and polished >> annoying, stretched and played.

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^^^^ sure kid...this battle wasn't bad at all...

but thanx for the time taken to drop "feedback"

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V/ENGYMA
He came better than N-Sight
his versehad better punches
he had very few personals
this site nees to actually learn what personals are
but, good flow
it feels like you really went for his neck
good job

N-Sight
weak, putting ''''s in your verse is wack as fuck,
and it seems like you was trying to hard
forcing punches
forcing everything,
example:
I'll 'punch down ur throat' with a 'watch on my wrist'..make u 'take ur time'..
So when u spit, ur thoughts will be 'clear crystal'..then I will 'BREAK ur mind'
wtf is "break your mind"?
that was weak
and you was forcing unneccassary multis
like that slim picking bullshit
like I said earlier
v/engyma
because
he came better

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