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06-03-04, 06:24 PM | #1 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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Had To Get Him
IP: F302 F64E
i'd appreciate feedback please
Caught him thuggin, muggin on tha corner Never saw him before, he was a foreigner Hat low, pants low, but he was straight high Already makin plans to kill him....he must die He gave me a bad vibe, sumthin bout him I ain't like He slowly faced me and and mugged like I ain't gone fight Without movin my lips I told him to state his purpose Of being on my block before I erase him like his life was worthless The blunt in my hand started sendin smoke to my eyes And this nigga had a blunt too, to my surprise He asked me "what kinda shit you smokin?" Wit a mean sneer to invoke fear I just told him that its potent I took a hit of mine,he took a hit of his Realize we looked so alike, you'd think we were twins separated as kids He laughed and said "I only smoke blunts wit high taste and a lil lace To tha point where I'm so high I can't feel my face" He even told me my shit was dipped too Said his dope boi was the same crip too I touched my .45, muttered "Nigga you wildin" He touched his heat too and just started smilin It was like he was readin my thoughts....I took another puff He inhaled too, even with my signature huff Had to let him know"Aiyo, yoiu gotta dip" He barely moved, just said "you gotta lotta lip" That was the last straw, I aimed tha heat, ready to kill He grabbed his at the same time and said"Both our blood gonna spill" I emptied the clip...he shot too Layin in my blood I heard him laugh and say "Nigga I AM YOU!" I died with him right there...and when my family saw the casket A neighbor told them that he saw me arguin and shootin my self ...All because I was faded off a blunt that was dipped in acid so tragic |
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06-03-04, 06:37 PM | #2 | |||
Addicted
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IP: D50F 16C0
lol that was dope homey.....keep it gangsta....keepin comin
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06-03-04, 06:40 PM | #3 | ||||
♡»..::[[.вlιиgαα.]]::..«♡
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
!Propz! Nice Drop' ...!! Dope' Just Like Ecko Said' ...!! Stay Up Boi ^
Wun Luv -Out-
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06-03-04, 06:44 PM | #4 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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IP: F302 F64E
fa sho...thank you for the feedback...
nice pics lunatic^^.... |
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06-03-04, 06:49 PM | #5 | ||||
♡»..::[[.вlιиgαα.]]::..«♡
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
FaSho' .. !! Yo' Welcome ..... BabeBoi
-Keep Doing What Chu Do-
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06-03-04, 07:05 PM | #6 | ||||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 3240 794D
eeeeeeewwwwwww good story fam..........CS.........holla!
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06-04-04, 01:23 AM | #7 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: EC0B 84C7
C.S. WHAT???????!!!!!!!!!!!
hot story fam..........killem all homie. ha. s.v.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-04-04, 09:02 AM | #8 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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IP: F302 F64E
hahahaha fas ho you know how we do....anyways keep tha feedbsck coming please...Uno
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06-04-04, 09:12 AM | #9 | |||||
Out-Spoken
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IP: B20F 67F7
I felt it a lot...imagery was nice...flow was near flawless....everything was set up real good...i knew where it was goin...so if you were goin for a suprise than you might wanna work on that...but yea....i also think you should of left the very last part out...because we all kinda got the picture...you should of stopped at "Nigga I am you!!!" that was perfect...but anyways...good drop...keep bangin..It'd be nice if you could check out my latest open mic the title is immortal technique topical...it shouldn't be too hard to find it's close to the top...anyways...regardless if you check it or not....2 fingas one love
holla
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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06-04-04, 11:07 AM | #10 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2B83 7A47
One word.......gay!
Just kidding.......LOL. That shit was pretty tight, but you probably already know that, don't you..........
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06-04-04, 10:31 PM | #11 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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IP: F302 F64E
LOL...youre a bastard...uppin!
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06-05-04, 10:59 PM | #12 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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IP: F302 F64E
damn can I get some more feedback please?
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06-06-04, 04:16 PM | #13 | |||||||
Black Thief still...
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IP: F302 F64E
Uppin
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06-06-04, 09:25 PM | #14 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: B498 633B
A jo i liked this..stay up and keep droppin
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06-07-04, 12:31 PM | #15 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: B20F 67F7
yo that shyt was fire good storyline i was def feelin it keep it comin iight.............................
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