iight, u spit first

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lol, u must be kiddin

wen i battle the mic is the trigger and im da oozi//
ur soft flow belongs on nicktoons as a PG movie//
ma punches hit harder than tyson in his hay//
ma skills are 10 out of10, 9 wen im havin an off-day//
if overwieght was a plus, ma skills r fat//
this guys pussy am i battlen a man or Kyla Pratt//
im sick like bin laden wit a scheme//
ur flow is terrible, but wen given head ur supreme/
this battle belongs in ma "best of" archive//
4 wins, 2 losses, ur number 5.

come one son waiting for your verse

yo eclipse, dat was pretty good for ur first battle, i trust u dont have a crew, so hit me bac if u intersted, hurry up tho.

iight ummm naw i aint in a crew what do you have in mind...

pm me with the detail's

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He He He' This was a tight battle both of you came real nice, I though Eclipse had it locked after reading his verse but 23 you gave him a run for the money. I was split 50/50 on the opener, closer, wordplay, creativness, and flow. However, what the decideing factor was more punches. Eclipse, had a few more punches in the middle, cause I wasn't really feel'n the overweight bit as well as the bin landen line either. With those two taken away I give this one to Eclipse, tight battle though. Both funny shit.

Peep my battle,

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iight uppin for some more votes thankz will return the favor

Nice Battle But Keep the Gun Talk Out of Yo Lyrics Both of Yall Done It but Eclipse U done it More but no punches So In dis Battle Imma Go wit Laughs

Bestline-

Step in and prove you're "flweight",for christ's sake..
The talk is show, I'll drown you in Ricki's Lake..

8/10

worsteline-The Gunplay

bestline-if overwieght was a plus, ma skills r fat//
this guys pussy am i battlen a man or Kyla Pratt//

nice-8.5/10

worsteline-Gunplay

but winner-Mjust i guess because i hate Gunplay lyrics and eclipse had more

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from what i seen it was a real close one...
both came with some funny shit...but i have to give it to mjust23
because he had a good opener and a powerful but funny finisher....
vote-mjust23

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You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
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All you bitches is running like
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knocking me!!

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wow this was a tight ass battle... very nice... i wasnt expectin much from eclipse but i was wrong... he had a tight ass verse... i loved the opener man:

Step in and prove you're "flweight",for christ's sake..
The talk is show, I'll drown you in Ricki's Lake...

thats some good shit dawg... real good...

but on the other hand Mjust23 had a kick ass drop as well and came a little harder at ya with the punches as well... i really liked this line:

ma punches hit harder than tyson in his hay//
ma skills are 10 out of10, 9 wen im havin an off-day

mostly because of the tyson line...

both of yall had a real good battle and i was really supprised by eclipse i think he is gonna be a force to be reckoned with in the future.. both of yall need to elevate a little and stretch ya lines out but in this one imma have to vote honestly and go with eclipse... i wasnt expecting to but thats the way shit goes some times in this game i guess... good fuckin battle boys.... good fuckin battle...

VOTE- ECLIPSE

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Both were good, hard to decide, I think Eclipse had better punchlines tho

both of yall did real good. yall both spit hard but i think mjust had the best punches. so my vote is 2 mjust23