AYO THIS BITCH THINKS ITS FUNNY, AYO WHATS FUNNY BITCH, FUCKIN DOWN BEAT BITCH WITYAH LOL WORK ON ALL ASPECTS AN SHIT, STUPID FUCKIN BITCH, AN I KNOW I TRYED TALKIN TO U ON THE LOW AN EXPLAIN YAH FUCKIN STUPIDTY, BUT HEY BITCHS R BITCHs[CLOCKS GUN][SHOOTS THE BITCH]REST IN PEACE U FUCKIN HOMO SCAB FOLD

verse 1
ayo watch u footin on the floor~mah nerves an screw looses grow off loose droppin more than ma balls~wen i bag this lil ho no mo is she gonna laugh for readin mah flow//
like it or not this the direction of tha script~like a fuckin horror movie jason strippin then skinnin this bitch//
open yah mouth let me fill it~open yah legs~drillin a flathead knife handle or philips~let me spill it to yah i'm hatin on white ho's blow yah chest back like these physcos in high schools whos eye buldge wen holdin a rifle//
leave the stomach opened back mixin bloodin an skin ur nex of kin thinks this bitch is 199 pound tub of strawberry jello mixed in a trifle[mashed up]this bitch belongs on a dick//
stop cryin bout ur daddy~weren't his fault he likes the tastin of ur fanny~spit roastin an boastin wit ur gran daddy~curious to fuck u on ur period~whilst ur cryin i walk in an make u suck dry ur lil tampon tampax paddy//
holla at yah crew make em grab me~i smack beef like these cats~runnin from dogs pissin themselfs meowin whilst like a pitbull i spit full blown diss's to these homo's callin themselfs the blueprint team //
i'm pleased jus to hear ur screams~whilst ur lungs hungs drippin as heart melts~see i'm keen to keep an reep the pay to rape ur body as ur rot skin bleeds//
ur've never met a mutha fucka like me~i'm a whole different race~leave u on yah back bent forward in the bath tub~backs num ur pleadin ur case~then outta paraletic fear u fuckin shit all over your face//

HOOK
Test mah patience screamin suckin on mah meat//
chokin then u bleedin from the deep throat lesson for a ho//
guess i'm sayin bitch rest in peace//
trust ur'll be forever sleepin peices as i talk so seemless//
feel less then being told that this ain't right~jus u bitch so thats alright//

verse 2
like a serial killer~04 urban version of the 70's 'hammer'~u maybe victim 1 so i guess i shud thank yah//
drug in yah cocktail~+1 hour~mah cock sails right pas the openin of yah mouth~u tryin to find out why ur lungs can't shout~seman tha las thing ur tastin before ur heart blacks out//
so tell me what its like as open ur legs~i kno ur really like'n ur begs~its funny right before ur cliterus bled red stains on white floor'd cage~ur fuckin mouth be taped~ur kno ur've been raped so i open ur legs for this~call ur linda blair whilst we reanact that scene with the cross in the Exorcist//
stop screamin in pain~no-ones there to listen as i'm ridin ur face~whilst u hang from a lace u thought ur mouth was goin white till i showed a mirror of ur face//
sickness hides in mah rap~u talk trash~it ok~i'll jus shove ur mic so far up ur ass u spit it out in flash//
hang ur corpse like a trophy~choke as ur throat bleed an in hope see ur whole team hang like some cold meat//
my darkness~is from the fact that i'm heartless~ur've been dead for a week still ur lay in a harness~picture this i ripped this bitch an still fuckin her carkuss//
people ask what this bitch did to desserve this~ she jus laughed at mah words which make a case to fuckin die'n for hittin nerves which in turn feel like she's dien on purpose//
i ain't got no tolarance~to be honest i'm wrong which is maybe from watchin to much clockwork orange vids//
back to her as i cut her to peices~throw her body parts all over her presinct the police think~its another dead ho inturn makin society decent~aparts from ur laughin i geuss thats jus one of mah reasons ur dien for readin//

HOOK
Test mah patience screamin suckin on mah meat//
chokin then u bleedin from the deep throat lesson on how not to breath//
guess i'm sayin bitch rest in gods peace//
trust ur'll be forever sleepin peices as i talk so seemless//
feel less then being told that this ain't right~jus u bitch so thats alright//

LOL ^^ was this a diss at someone?

yeh DangerousMyndLunatic

ah i think u made a big mistake ive seen her shit she pretty dope and why u dissin her she pretty nice to everyone

she probaly pretty koo wit peeps round here but the bitch cut me down wit sum bullshit remark, i asked her bout it an the bitch puts *enough said* at the end of her reply. bitch gonna shoot me out i'ma do sumthin bout it yah kno.

5-6/10...weak diss...bad everythin...ya structures fucked up, no hard hittn punchesx, no personals, flow wuz bad aswell...ayo..if she tell you to work on somethin that aint considered a diss, shes jus tellin you to elevate...i neva seen her sey nythin mean to ny1 so iono why you would make a diss to her, she's really nyce...dont go throwin disses everywhere u want to mayn do it cuz u have beef or your likely to get merked or end up wit alotta enemies...but work on yo shiet fam, every1 gotta start somewhere...good luck......pz

Lol If She Says The Word "safe" Thats As Mean As She Gettin Rofl

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"Safe" .. Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!! .. Lmfao!!!!


- Aiight This Is Constructive Critisism' .. Nothing Disrespectful Or Anything Like That.. First Off Your Structure Was Off Balance Witch Threw Your Whole Flow Off Balance..!! Lines Were Uneven..Some Lines Were Filler Others Were Not...!!!!!!! Elevate.. You Have Potential Kiid' ..!! Just Work At What You Do...!! And You Will Gradually, Slightly Get Better At Wha Chu Trynna Do!!!!!!!!!!

-I Do Thank You For Taking The Time Of Day To Write This Verse Out To Me Though... Much Appriciated...!!!!!!

But Checck It ..!!

Checckity Checck Checkk..!! (Here's A Lil Summin Summin Nothing To Personal) BabyBoi!!!


Verse:

This site is a chatroom thanks to Maki lyrical,
Obvious lonely bastard who jerks off in the urinals,
You silly hoe you blow your lips are for dicks,
Battling DML was the closest contact you had with a chick,
You lost more your than seses, ignored the www.rapbattles.com census,
Your fashion scored big and was look upon offensive,
Immense brain damage makes your style comprehensive,
Don't take it as a 'Diss' you're retarded and i'm being pensive,

!!!
DML - DangerousMyndLunatic!!!

You're Salt only good fot target practice..!!!! -

Wun Luv
~Lil Swirl~

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^No Disrespect.. Plain & Simple.. Even Though You 'TRY' And Dissrespect Me.. Its All Good.. 'What Goes Around Comes Around' .. Just Not In Mah Direction..!!!

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no u do.... ...ahem....

I Do What ^^^ LmfaoO ..

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have potential...if yannoe what i mean....hehe....they needa get a winking icon....>_>

lol God Bless Ya BabeBoi' ..!! *Smiles*

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... lol!!!!!! But Dayum..This Shiatttttttttttt Was Long

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