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5 | 100.00% |
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07-26-04, 09:13 PM
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the medicine man
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Dilettante vs hotshh! (punchline battle)
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Punchline battle
10 lines no feeding no biting, no crew votes/hate votes no dickriding. you first me after mine'll be up tomorrow |
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07-26-04, 09:16 PM
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IP:
Checkin in, but eyyo......i thought a punchline battle was 2lines 1 punch...........this is a text battle....but i'll styl murda u neway.
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07-26-04, 09:25 PM
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the medicine man
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IP:
check in
its 10 lines as long as theres a punch in each 2 lines |
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07-26-04, 09:47 PM
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This nigga can't finish his name cuz he goin into seizure
My words take his soul like I'm da Grim Reeper Fake Emcee callin this a punline battle? You mo hopeless then the plot of Sleepless in Seattle My lyrics screw you so much you look like a contortionist For you to stop I insist, but you styl persist So I bend ova for yo lips dat ain't never been kissed And have you pucker like you drinkin a lemon pepsi twist Everyday a broken clock is right at least two times But you a powered off electro dat been blanked from my rhymes
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07-28-04, 01:06 PM
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IP:
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again, ok.. 7/10 Hotshh, I can't quote you so heres the breakdown.. You started off kinda, i don't know.. but everything else was more creative than his. also the rhyme scheme was much better. I liked how you rhymed with metaphore also.. so v/hotshh |
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07-26-04, 10:18 PM
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the medicine man
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IP:
Ha! Ha!
lets go Diledicky's telling jokes but he aint come Prepared Cause Ima Son You like me and ya Moms Had an Affair And my Metaphors you aint Ready For/ There's Plenty More They'll be talking to ya Ghost Like Patrick Swayze And Demi Moore So what I need A Semi For? He's not Worth It If I turn Around and spit on this Clown, Ill make the Earthsick You implode like Internal Combustion Fall into Narcalyptic Sleep As I go deep like Finger Fucking Now you can act like a man, But that would only make You an Actress Wack Bitch...Ill lay you out flat like a Boxspring Mattress That it |
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07-26-04, 10:42 PM
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the medicine man
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IP:
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07-26-04, 10:52 PM
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look at this
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IP:
ight honest vote hotshh!
dil-ya shit was all played lines u didnt have much complexity our originalty in ya punchs ive read just about all of that shit before so it was boring to read i didnt feal really any of ya punchs hit hard hotshii-decent punchs your structure had me fucked for a second but nnot to hard to read lil bit more creative then dil an somewhat harder hittin but i think u edged this battle out |
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07-26-04, 11:06 PM
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uppin............................................. .................................................. ............................................
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07-27-04, 01:04 AM
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uppin2............................................ ......
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07-28-04, 11:40 AM
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the medicine man
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uppin
"If lifes a test, what u gotta do to pass? who decides when you fail? and whats the name of the class? -hotshh- |
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07-28-04, 12:54 PM
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Daillest Nigga~~NOK~~
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ill give my vote to hotshh....he had sum creative shit...punches....stucture was a lil off...overall good vere
dtante....good verse but didnt really hit as hard as hotshh..... vote~~hotshh
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07-28-04, 01:44 PM
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the medicine man
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uppin............................................. ..........
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07-29-04, 03:54 PM
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the medicine man
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Man just vote, i dont care but finish this....................
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07-30-04, 04:10 AM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP:
ok...good battle but Hotshh! took it
Hotshh!-you had a good flow...your punches hit harder than his...more creative and i liked how it all was rhymed with metaphor....nice....ok structure Dil-That structure was ok....not that good...no offense...i dunno...your punches were weak....they like nipped him...your punches just was kinda bad...Hotshh! would've took it with just half of his verse 
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