deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
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no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
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REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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Checkin in'... Good luck, VanGo. Good luck, .:Faceless:.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

check good luck

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1470359


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...962#post1468962http://<br /> <br /> <br /> <br ...d=1#post1470372

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Aight, check it...
VanGo talks quite a big game, but for real, your just a nuisance
Leave this pussy laid out, like I was readin' his fuckin' Blue Print
Kid's sad, check him, his avy's the only thing slightly compelling
& every time Van laid down the law, it got up and started yelling
I'm back in the system, put all your crappy bars back in re-verse
Wrote that disaster, yo, a VanGo work of art never looked worse
It's a shame when you model yourself after a fat fuckin' mob boss
Cuz Van's pussy in origin, like he was born from some1's clit sauce
Fire a bullet round my foot level, went straight thru his fuckin' head
Van lives hip hop? They weren't kiddin' when they said it was dead
I slid past the Heavyweight Contendorship like Iwas wearin' jet-skis
Leave him wakin' up soaked with sweat, I even ruin his wet dreams
Later

*No need to drop for flash, he did'nt check in.*

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

This is the breakdown for that nice verse all ya'll keep talkin' about. Stretched and wack. Perfect way to make it to the Heavyweight. LMAO... Fuckin' D/R's.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

ok god weak verse no good punches all disses aint hit hard but you had good struture and flow.vango good opener and nice wordplay a hard hitting ender and good punches won this for you.
vote-vango

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

ROFL

vango takes this easly....god your verse was wack....if you the actuall god from original you fallin apart man

if flash was in this he woulda ripped yall motha fuckers

U can't be serious, callin' yourself an RB vet, hardhitter. LOL... This place gasses so many heads it's ridiculous.... Oh well, uppin this for real votes...

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

lol....

vango- i was dissapointed.. people were saying you were really good, but this verse was played... you didnt flip the punches well at all... holy punch-would have been good if flipped..-sac-religious.. was decent..goalie punch... really played-you should have flipped it better...that depressant line was helkla played.... this verse didnt do you justice...


dark-opener was quite nice...igot the wordplay in it.. crack on his avy was a good thought, but u ruined it with that law line...hip hop line was decent..closer was decent also..


My vote goes to Darklight.. he had way less played lines..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Vango- pretty nice verse..good punches some had me laughing..ha ha
did good adding personals up with there your flow was nice

8./10

God- in your verse you had some good punches and some not so good
pretty good verse you did have some personals vango just hit harder

7.5/10

v/Vango

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O Know, He's Back!

^- Agreed'

Vango- Decent Verse, Punches Connected, Had Some Personals And Flowed Good Throughout...
Vango-8.2/10

God- Your Verse Was Ok Too, Punches Connected In Certain Lines, Overal Wasnt Enough To Beat Vango Though...
God-6.9/10

Final Vote- Vango

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This is fucked... Well, thanks for voting, it's 2-1 as of now... hardhitter the herb doesn't count.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

hm.....good bars from Vango...

So I'm putting the Spotlight on Darklight, and then I'm going to pull the plug
See your lyrics they simply put me to sleep, like an anti-depressant drug
You could never stop me from scoring a win, not even if you were a goalie
How do you expect to get a title shot Darklight, when all your lyrics are "Holey"
^played tho. U had good punches but worked 2 hard on his name with all the religious punches..u shuda wrote one dope one left it at that then saved it 2 make punches about other stuff.

Bad things...

^what I said above beneath the punches I liked &,...

Be thankful this only the net Kid, because you can't hear nobody boo ya
Pack your bags Darklight, this battles over, can I get an AMEN, HALLELUJAH

just not very good.

God. Generally a good verse....erm...liked ur wordplay & these lines..

VanGo talks quite a big game, but for real, your just a nuisance
Leave this pussy laid out, like I was readin' his fuckin' Blue Print
Kid's sad, check him, his avy's the only thing slightly compelling
& every time Van laid down the law, it got up and started yelling
Fire a bullet round my foot level, went straight thru his fuckin' head
Van lives hip hop? They weren't kiddin' when they said it was dead
I slid past the Heavyweight Contendorship like Iwas wearin' jet-skis
Leave him wakin' up soaked with sweat, I even ruin his wet dreams

^nice lines..the rest were a bit blah...more quotables...complexity & wit from u

V/ GOd. Nice battle

upppin for some votes, hey i wouldve want to battle me next week eithe Apo, ha ha.................

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.