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str8_hood 1 16.67%
I. Mind 5 83.33%
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Old 09-04-04, 08:21 PM   #1
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Old 09-04-04, 08:22 PM   #2
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Old 09-04-04, 08:34 PM   #3
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Old 09-04-04, 09:43 PM   #4
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Topic: Why


Why do we live in a country thats full of racism...
Why do we have a president thats full of hate in him...
Why did he say we need to find weapons of mass destruction..
And why we still in war after searchin and we found nothin..
Isn't Bush suppost to keep his promise and have commitment...
But then why did he say he'll take care of poverty but didn't.....
Why is it soon cuz of war we about to have another draft...
And why is it quickly in the towers two jet planes sadley crashed..
Why's it my teach the one dat felt the pain flyin into the pentagon..
And tell me why is bush usin that moment to get our men kept strong...
Why does he always use nine/eleven as an excuse to go to war...
Why is it that some of our men fightin dont' know wut they fightin for..
Why is it some of the men fightin don't even care for our country...
And tell me why is it that the U.S. only cares of makin money..
Why is it after fightin for one year they about to come home with honor..
But right before they come they're told to stay just only six months longer...
Why is it who we trust the most is the one who decieves us...
And the only one we could trust most is our Savior Lord Jesus...
Why is it we go through high school knowin later we gonna drop out..
Why are people even votin for someone that they know shyt about...
Why are people tryin ta be someone they don't even wanna be...
But Why is making it through college at such a low possibility...
Why is it that the rich never have to face somethin really scary...
Like da only way for me ta pay for college is to join the military...
Why is it that only the rich people live a life thats so humble...
When the poor like me gotta live a life 40 years full of struggle...
Why's it im the only one in my fam dats a U.S. citizen...
And that everyone else in my fam got here as a imigrant...
Why's it I do everything and no one does nething for me...
And tell me why can everyone relate to this type of story..
Im glad you read this verse, n hope it was worth your time...
I just hope you finally know the truth after you've heard mine..


This shyt is all true

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Old 09-04-04, 10:27 PM   #5
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Why everyday in the hood u got another nigga dying
And politicians lyin to win the election what kind of life is this?
My mom cryin just cause it’s a struggle to make it
Aint got enough money to pay the bills this life aint the greatest
Why terrorist take over that school in Russia them kids was innocent
Why our students aint learning nothin why half of em is illiterate
Why the U.S.A. gotta be the world police
Tryin to stop wars overseas when we got wars in our streets
Why all the races still segregated I thought we made it
Past the phase of not being tolerated cause u different races
Why they hate us why they gotta go after the twin towers
Why cant they confront us face to face why they gotta be cowards
Why niggas getting locked up for comittin stupid crimes
And if we live to die whats the point in tryin hard to survive
Why the only president we got or had was a white dude
Look at the evidence they racist if u colored they don’t like you
Why the french aint help when we decided to go to war
And why it aint over yet why people still layin face down in the floor
why on Sunday aint nobody packin the steeple
And why is this the only way I can talk to my people



this was in a rush. like 10 mins
 
Old 09-04-04, 11:20 PM   #6
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Old 09-05-04, 11:55 AM   #7
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Old 09-05-04, 01:43 PM   #8
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uppin for some votes yo
 
Old 09-05-04, 07:57 PM   #9
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uppin 4 votes
 
Old 09-05-04, 11:56 PM   #10
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Voted For: I. Mind

Damn that was pretty tight I.Mind. I read str8's first,and thought it was good,then I read yours and thought it was great.You had great vocab and you talked about the truth about a lot of unexplained things to many ppl.That was kong but pretty much all the lines were hot and touched me.Your structure was pretty good and overal your verse was real good.
str8,your verse was pretty sweet,but it didnt hit as hard as I's.Your flow was a little worse and your structure not as great but you were talking about some powerful stuff in it.Youre both pretty dope topical heads and good luck in the future.

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Old 09-06-04, 06:52 PM   #11
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Old 09-06-04, 10:35 PM   #14
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Old 09-06-04, 11:11 PM   #15
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ok i mind wins in vocab and he had a good verse too with nice shit but it concentrated too much on political shit which is ok but i think why should be expanded on more here a nice verse with o.k imagery a 5/10now i know you and ingenious is diffrent people fo real cuz shell kill you in a topical
str-8 good shit here i like how you brodaned your topics on such a wide range of issues it was dope sun good ass endeing too i didnt think you had this good of a verse in you i was wrong as fuck dope shit that trying hard to survive line is so true it gave me the shivers this needs better vocab but it had a ill image and was fucking dope a 8/10
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